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Old 01-11-07, 04:44 AM   #1
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INDUSTRY OVER ! - WITH ME OR NOT..THIS IS CERTIFIED CRACK..STEP UP NIGGAS..i will rtf

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"Industry Over" produced by Mister KA..

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Old 01-11-07, 04:51 AM   #2
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Old 01-11-07, 11:12 AM   #3
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Wow at y'all sleepin on me...damn
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Old 01-11-07, 01:29 PM   #4
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so ima be the first to feed this shit? word up...that shit at the start makes it sound a lil technoey but its a cool sound. word comin in with the politic style lyrics...word up im def feelin ya lyrics like i told you on msn. hook is catchy, it's def ill. Your delivery stands out a lot on this track compared to most ya other tracks, thats a ill job my dude. ya swagger is the same as usual....ILL word up im def feelin this track prah, this better have a video or ima fly to Bekay and shoot you with ya own gat wukka. lol jk 1
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Old 01-11-07, 03:41 PM   #5
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Old 01-12-07, 12:41 AM   #6
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pretty cool track man

i like this beat. KA beats are nice.
somethin diffrent.
here u come in. cool delivery.
same flow as always. not a bad thing.
newyork swag. hahaha.
lyrics are nice.
i like the chorus..
word i like this track...
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Old 01-12-07, 12:22 PM   #7
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Thanks bruh......
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Nice beat...and real nice quality...

The first flow is nice, and fits the beat perfectly, caring emotion where it needs to be. Lyrics are nice in some places but off position in others..

The chorus, seems to be doubled too much, causing an over effect ..but the lyrics to it are nice.

Second verse, flow is decent, but your emotion falls off at certain parts...still the second verse hit pretty hard.

Chorus again..

Third verse has seem feel as the other ones, not much diffrent here, except the lyrics but the concept is all the same.

Decent track here, nice production and quality on this. You should feel lucky to have the nice equipment to use man. Nice track and keep droppin.

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Old 01-12-07, 09:24 PM   #9
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woooow! lol, damn man this shit is hott. CRACK CRACK. lol. Anyways u got fire and u only 16, that says alot. Quality superb, flow is ON POINT, lyrics is tight, chorus def the best on this. Im feelin your shit, keep it up man. def keep it up.
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Old 01-18-07, 05:16 PM   #10
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why the fuck is people sleepin on this track.....wake up people!!! P.s where you been lately Prah?
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Old 01-19-07, 10:37 AM   #11
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hmmmnn feelin the beat for reals...goes pretty hard


heh like how u come in, nice adlibs....yea u def take after Jae Millz diff voice, u ridin the beat nicely

chorus is tight......big pun put together.....nice, like the RIP rapper shout outs on here

once again nice adlibs, overall i gotta say u got good mic presence, guess its due to the swag,

cant say much about the 3rd verse......not too much of change.....flow and delivery was about the same, ur really good with adlibs

yea ill say this is crack tho.....great beat and u hit it good with that swag


one of my latest.....vvvvv
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Old 01-20-07, 05:44 PM   #12
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beat choice witH KA is always a good choice flow is solid thruout nice commin in on the first hook is decent nothing stand outish but the shouts was real nice add libs was standout for me on this shit but definately doin it you got more name changes then baby diapers son stick wit one ...................HOLLA BACK
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Old 01-25-07, 01:28 AM   #13
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flows good man.. rep nyc. bronx rigth here. holla
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Old 01-26-07, 06:59 PM   #14
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it's a solid track



nothing major either way


beat was cool


didn't mind listenin



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