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07-01-05, 02:17 PM | #1 | ||||
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.:Intermental:. - .:This Is Me:. (Straight from the heart)
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Verse One: No-one seems to hear me, it seems Im deprived, It co-insides because it seems its God's plan devised, My life like a story, but with no fairy ending, My funeral comes around and no-one's attending, I always come across fakers who think theyre hard, My tears are really war torn battlefield scars, I see you "controllin" the streets, like you were the "mayor" Faggot fucked one girl and now he thinks hes a "player" I dedicate my self to Allah, Im true and I do the daily prayer, But because I swear my own religion calls me a failure, Teachers think Im shit, because I dont understand this, So I go and ask them and they shout "You dont understand shit", Thats why turn my head towards music, Ive got a brain, I dont abuse it, I use it. Hook: If you didnt know now you know This is me If you didnt know now you know This is me X2 Verse Two: My feelings are like pebbles, washed away to the shore, You take time to fuck, but my feelings you ignore, Theres alot of deceiving people, claimin that they are my friends, Damn they should really be actors, their best skill is to pretend, It seems that ill live for 7 days, reverse the story of creation, Don't give people wellfare, give them some education, I wanna be a millionaire but used too many lifelines, To acheive my goals, you would need many many life times, Im the fruit beared from the seed, that my parents planted for me, I can truly tell you that I can be what I wanna be till I decease, If you didnt know, now you know, that this is me. Hook: If you didnt know now you know This is me If you didnt know now you knoe This is me X4 till fades out
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07-01-05, 02:54 PM | #3 | ||||
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Thanks...will do.....uppin.....
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07-01-05, 03:24 PM | #4 | ||||
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uppin..................
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07-01-05, 03:41 PM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 9343 6490
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07-01-05, 04:28 PM | #6 | ||||
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uppppin....cmon people why the fuck cant anyone get no feedback
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07-01-05, 05:17 PM | #7 | ||||
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lets get some fuckin feedbak cmon
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07-01-05, 05:32 PM | #8 | ||||
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good drop, as messenger said good use of emotion, flow and structure was good also...................please RTF on one of my om drops, again good job, keep it up
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07-02-05, 02:10 AM | #9 | ||||
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Ok thanks dogg.......uppin this...........
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07-02-05, 10:29 AM | #10 | ||||
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uppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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07-02-05, 11:36 AM | #11 | ||||
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dude, this was nice. you elevating keep it up man. good flow and some nice lines too yo. Good shit. keep it up. pc one.
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07-02-05, 12:49 PM | #12 | ||||
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thanks dogg........uppin
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07-02-05, 01:30 PM | #13 | ||||
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upppin...............
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07-02-05, 03:08 PM | #14 | ||||
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upppppppppin.....................i will RTF
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07-02-05, 05:27 PM | #15 | ||||
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uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp
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