gee wilikers gatman they got me surronded
im on my way

(X-CELL)
(hook)Gatman
There's a problem I'ma solve it
A mutha fucka movin' around
With a big ass revolver and a batman
What the fuck are you retarded
(hook)You touch hood dwag I'll leave you dearly departed

its visable u misrable i said "it's over" did it not register/
u want some more pressure apllied through my rhyme texture//

it aint gonna happen thats not why im rappen its obvious ya started it/
r ya retarded the beef was disgaurded but if shit pops off im gaurded//

if any one mentions hood dwags name ill put a gun to ya frame/
perfect aim ill dose ya flame did ya hear me ill douse ya flame//

hood,X the perfect combination theres no choice ya respect our creation/
r rhyme formation got ya in a spirt of fustration we the new genartion//

so just spit ya bars or else ill have ya seein stars like astrology/
no apolige but i am thinkin logically im in ya head like psychology//

and i aint gonna leave ill come to ya team with a...

(hood dwag)
(hook)Gatman
There's a problem I'ma solve it
A nigga movin' around
With a big ass revolver and a batman
What the fuck are you retarded
(hook)You touch X I'll leave you dearly departed

muthafucka you retarded
touch me or excell i'll leave ya dead
and bombarded
you fuckin' ho's better be cautious
cuz i'm so perfect and so flawless
go on as if the game was lawless
getting rid of all rap's bosses
talk shit and end up jawless
i'll kill any rappaz thats racist
dump 'em behind a Payless
damn right i'm on ur playlist
never call names cuz
i dont fuck with the gayest
got a clip and bout ta waste this
so go ta sleep bitch die nameless
claim u diffrent but remain changeless
sick of bitches talkin from they anus
had nuthin ta say so u sang this
car accidents and police chases
no matter how i get places
rap certain tones at diffrent paces
this aint nuthin but filled with disgraces
u gon' missing with no traces
had nuthin else ta do so u play this

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Clcik Hear To Hear My Music

I Love Dat Last Verse Mayn Its Hot

thanx genious and yo excell u too ripped the shit yo u elevatin' since i cant rate myself i give ur verse a 7.5/10 atleast yo this an ill collab that we did

uppin on this...

i luv da original, and dis pretty koo

7/10

This peice was ok the structure was alright and the vocab had a few nice lines. It felt like somthing EM already did or with the same idea. Keep your mind open for new ideas. Overall good job keep at it.

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...CALIFORNIA GOLDEN BEAR...

dis was tight yall...nice collab...i didnt like tha hook on tha original so i down dat...but atleast yall had verses worth somethin...i was feelin hood's verse a lil more but w/e...7/10 cuz dat damn hook...lmao...pz
-DB

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not feelin this, cuz u stole the chorus from 50...

you should've jus put gatman & robin (remix) ft hood dawg

...plus the lyrics werent all that good tho

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My Lines Are ILL yo

sorry ya werent feelin it evoloution for everybody who felt our shit thanx for the feed and lates get more goin on cuz this shits hott

yeah thanks yall and hood dwag i rate ya verse at 8/10

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Clcik Hear To Hear My Music

uppin.............................................

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Clcik Hear To Hear My Music

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Clcik Hear To Hear My Music

nah i aint reading this...the reason? boring to read! put some fucking capitals damn

Damn You Got Lyrical Skills For Real Dawg Enjoyed But Maybe A Closer Look At Your Spelling Would Make Superb But Enjoyed This Piece