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02-18-05, 10:25 PM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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**Hip Hop Is Ours-d.j em sce and Enygma**
IP: 2FD5 47F6
Look at the title......what do you think it's about?
Anywho.... Hip Hop Is Ours Leave some feedback fuckface 
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02-18-05, 11:40 PM
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IP: 52FB 3AA1
aight...im listenin....Chorus...heh..i aint really feelin that...maybe if u woulda made dj voice to the left speaker.....
Dj...ya flow is ok off in some spots...well alot of spots...lyrics is good tho...emotion fits the beat...even tho ya verse is kinda low.... E...ya shit is straight...i got the feelin u mixxed this?? o_O...but ya flow is on point...i heard a lil fuck up tho lol....lyrics is tight...i like them dubs on there as well...ya levels were on point...dubs coulda been lower... overall this was a ok track..wit betta flow from dj it woulda been hella betta tho....and a betta chorus too
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02-19-05, 01:45 AM
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Ask About Me
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IP: 8A91 C997
dope shit enygma.......now i wanna do my verse over again....lol
enygma made this track nice....lol dope shit yo man this was nice.....one of my better tracks...lol good shit with the mixing yo
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02-19-05, 05:21 AM
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Rastafari Walk Tall
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IP: 733C 7E9D
listening.....beat is nice
djemscee comes in, ok flow, falls off in places, beat fits nicely with you voice..chorus is nice....quality could be better enygma comes in, flow flawless, ripping up the beat...lyrical content is nice, quality is better and so ur clearer and u sound better...damn fire man..... Hot track - 8.5/10 Peace -AC http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177716 - RTF
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02-19-05, 05:25 AM
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Ask About Me
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IP: 6531 B847
aye yo...sorry but i know i probably did fall off...but if you would be kind enough to point out exactyly where i fell off at..like what line was it....can you do that...
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02-19-05, 12:29 PM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: 2FD5 47F6
Uppity uppin this shizzle fo' rizzle........I'm so ganksta
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02-19-05, 12:41 PM
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IP: 52FB 3AA1
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02-19-05, 06:14 PM
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Ask About Me
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IP: CD1D FA3F
ok........................uppin this hsit ...and when you say im mot on beat explian and please post certain lines....so i know exactly where i fell off..
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02-19-05, 11:38 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: B80A A22F
Beat/Production: Hmm..I wasn't really feeling the beat too much, kinda of a mix of a Royca Da 5'9 beat and some santanic shit. Its ok though. Lyrics: Lyrics weren't too bad, both of you had average lyrics. Nothing above par but they were better than some wack mainstream shit. Flow: DJs was alright..I could tell in one or two parts where his flow just either stalled or a skip in vocals thats all. Besides that it was decent. Enygmas was same as Djs, both of them were decent. Delivery: Both peoples deliverys were good, both seemed pretty into their spits. Always good to be heavily involved in what you spitting with. Enygma kinda sounding like Method Mans style..damn nice. Quality: Quality was alright, but get that equalizer working. In verses I could tell the vocal levels changing. Like it would go real high and then real low. But besides that, quality was straight. Overall: This was a decent track, both sound good collabing together so thats a plus. Hook was decent, like the whole Jay Master Jay thing. 8/10. Hit Me Up For Collab....AIM: Yo Phuh Q Also Leave Feedback On My Song "Verbal Suicide" ~R~ |
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02-20-05, 03:25 AM
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Ask About Me
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IP: 17A6 8175
ok
i will get to that after this freestyle cypher i got going..
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02-21-05, 07:37 PM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: 2FD5 47F6
*cough*
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02-21-05, 10:24 PM
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP: 13A4 AD49
iight fuckface, listenin while typin...
I love the way dj comes onto the beat... you remind me of my boys cousin E.T- you have underground style galore waiting to oooze cuzzo... your lyrics are straight, and flow is good- however your pronounciation like mine- meaning u need to get better at it, you sound like you were off beat at one point in ur verse too, i dunno if it was a dub or you spittin but yeah... watch that shit... nice verse though... Enygmizzle - ur shit is nice too, quality wise sounds a little better than DJ's, your flow is correct- lyrically you starting to scare me a little, you havin no trouble w/ length of your verses like old times- One thing I can recommend is don't be so rigid, you tryin so hard to keep the rhymes correct that you aint havin enough fun towards the end, u get a little robotic... watch that shit fuckface all in all though this was such a dope track as far as rv standards go... keep impressin me, and leave me feedback in some shit  11
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02-21-05, 11:14 PM
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LowerTown's Finest
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IP: BDE1 4837
i liked this beat ALOT - delivery was nice hook was safe
you know, i was feeling this track alot nothing really i can say about it to fix it, guess its whatever you like in life that counts and i liked this
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02-22-05, 01:21 AM
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Ask About Me
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IP: CF9B C251
word yo
thanks for the feedbakc seven third...shit really did help me...i got fix my dubs for now on....word.....and stay on beat....*which im getten better at staying on beat yo.. knight,,,,,thanks yo...i hinestly think this has alot of improvemnet,,, but liek oyu said its watever you liek... uppin
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02-24-05, 12:54 AM
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Ask About Me
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IP: 9378 1653
so im guessing this track was weak????????????????
you up shit too much, between u and enygma this shit got upped 8 times... comeone man dont make me be a dick
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my MYSPACE is Better than Yours Last edited by SevenThird : 02-24-05 at 01:06 AM. |
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