not a freestyle or anything to a beat just something i wrote for whoever to read....feedback please




a breath of fire....an intake of energy....
hyper like a little child....mind so crazy....
full of inner thoughts unthinkable obseen things...
permanent glory in war like a warlord destroying communities....
destructive intentions seems like your high off drugs....
being chotic in the mind chaos everywhere no hugs...
just bullet rounds in the bodies leaving souls walking stray....
for eternity on earth a lost spirit in dismay...
strange how the worlds bent on bitterness...
when we suppose to be happy live well as the best....
but instead....
many live in poverty....homicide rings...
threw cities and countries everyday of the week....
this is reality....
some or most ignore it like the truth God brings...
these unclean poetic flowing rhyme schemes.....
are deadly like infecting children purposely with HIV.....
its like being sick in the head stick the medicine in the vains....
and it still wont penetrate the waves to change in this brain.....
everyday can be like inhaling gas that melts your insides....
cause the world is cruel crossed with continueous crime.....
nothings really sterile....like reused dirty medical equipment....
many are waiting for a cure but instead get a vaccine treatment.....
global warming causes the planet to get closer to hell....
so are days are grime slim and hard to tell.....

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