man aint nobody wanna listen/
there's some truth behind these lines your missin/
ya want a little proof , tha topic of tha story isnt fiction/
....................ha ha ha.....ya thats right...i was
left alone... out on my own tryin provide my daughter a better home/
there's nothing im hideing behind ......im stronger than i know
eight years i spent with tha mother of my child..........
sheded many tears over those years........but tha sex was wild
mabey thats wat kept me around cuz it sure tha fuck wasnt her smile...
wat a way ta protect my rep but at least i keep up my style/
moven ta tha next step walkin tha 8mile...of denile

some times we feel like quitin , like are expectations in life are slippin
everything a rapper's spittin , is nit picken admittin it
we laught at it after,... memorize every line ta make it sond faster
it is a talent we overcome an master.......
we express our feelins an make a little magic with ink ta cause a desaster
if ya heads a mess you can form a group like NSYNC
TO SEXUALLY PERFORM MASTERBATION backstage ......
ya get it......center page

ya do wat you can to become a man...
ya set goals to reach in life but they get fucked up once agian
an just when ya thought ya had enough ya get puuled down by your ex-girlfriend....................
i never regreted bein picked on/ growin up as a kid
dont know how im still breathen doin wat i did
taunted me to fight back for wat i believed in
please god forgive me for my sin.................CB83

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some nice shit dogg
structure could use some work...
decent wordplay, the concept of the peice was good, some wit an humour about a few of your lines too, closed the peice nicely, it had a bit little bit of everythin' in there, some decent stuff dogg, just improve your structure, besides that theres not much u can fault about this, good lookin out fam

go check our forum, sign in for week 1 if u havnt already, new threads an stuff up, crew mission is up so ta be sure ta earn your wager by completing the misson, go check the forum dogg an just post what u want in there

nice drop, propps to you dogg, 7/10 for this

Peace out

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