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Letting Go
IP: 8AFB 7775
Fear flows like water, slowly filling the room/
My mental mediocrity prophesising my impending doom/ Not emotianally strong, my mind tells me I'm wrong/ My mind screaming, my faults telling me I cant't go on/ Mind clouded by sin and pain, soul hounded by demonic acid rain/ The walls close in, as I pound and scream in vain/ No one can hear or see, my emotional prison slowly killing me/ My imperfections shown through a TV screen/ Killing me that I can't be those rappers on MTV/ Drowning in my own insecurity/ Floating away in emotional slo-mo/ Fuck no, too late I've let go/ |
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IP: A086 F184
Why u posted this twice?
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Damn, it wasn't on purpose. Must have double clicked the post button.
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IP: A086 F184
Anyways This piece was nice for a newbie , the first seven lines were Sick , but the last 5 lines were Whack..........U fell off , and that messed you up..............I see u had some nice Wordplay in there.............Ur vocab was aight , Overall This piece was Aight , I give u a 6.5/10 , Return the favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=72854
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No other comments? Anyone? Plz?.............................
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