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Old 06-19-04, 12:18 PM   #1
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rhyming help

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I'm a little confuzed with rhyming because when you have a big word and try to rhyme, you end up only rhyming the last part of the word which isn't a perfect rhyme. So please can anyone out there explain how to rhyme perfect and how you look at a word to make the flow sound really good cause i've been messing up on this and I really want to elevate so bad. If you can, you could spit the word up and highlight it how the sounds fit in, I would need this explained perfectly to understand because it's a big problem dat i wanna overcome. Peace
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Old 06-19-04, 12:21 PM   #2
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first off wryte a good bar first like "yo, can't fuck with me cauze my rhymez'll make you go to sleep...", and then wryte a good metaphor 4 tha second bar and when i do it i don't have 2 relate 2 tha 1st
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Old 06-19-04, 12:22 PM   #3
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Find ya own style and get confortable with it lil homie`
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Old 06-19-04, 12:27 PM   #4
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Your missing the point that I already told you. It's rhyming I don't understand not my verse style. Like practical, I would look at dat and say mistical or somet, but I'm not sure to rhyme the whole word or just part of it and where 2 change the letters, it's really hard to explain 4 me. Just need dis explained as well as you can. Peace
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Old 06-19-04, 12:30 PM   #5
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show me 2 barz of u, i'ma check it out
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Old 06-19-04, 01:09 PM   #6
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This guys got no flowing, just brings rapping to slowing down/
it's blinding how this rapper thought he was good but just a clown/
To me dats how i look at you, When ur gonna throw loads accusations/
When i step and destoy u like evaporation, dis is my little stimulation/
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Old 06-19-04, 05:13 PM   #7
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as a vet on here, ill try to help you out... down and clown is a good rhyme, i use multies 100% of the time, but thats just my style... now would i rhyme accusation with stimulation... probably not, stim, and acc, dont sound alike, even though the end rhymes... now... i see how u threw evaporation in their, i got a question... why not rhyme accusation with evaporation... and throw stimulation in the middle... little shit like that helps ur rhymes... any more questions...
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Old 06-20-04, 12:07 AM   #8
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^^ya wat he said its hard to explain how 2.. u just have to rap the way u rap
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