http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=172478


Check It....


(Anxiety)
You good at something in this game? Yeah probably graphics...
Wanna know why we're dope? Well dog it's honestly practice...
Improvin our tactics... Makin moves that are drastic...
Choreographing each move we make more than gymnastics...
Movin up in the brackets... Still droppin classics...
Molding you kids how we want to just like ur plastic...
Causing some static... No single move is erratic...
Never drop whack shit we just pulled out the attic...
Copying us? it's a habit... But faggots we've had it...
Still wanna know why were dope? Cause we rap like were addicts...

(~Babylon~)
masterfull skillz, hypnotize mc's into disasterous thrillz
in shock, fealings over come them, and half of its chillz
I own the key to their enter thoughts, i circle the vault
this is miracle talk, astonished with this verbal assault
my spirit is witcha, bending words and turnning scriptures
they lay in wait, no mistake, my slurs are burning to gitcha
paper and pencil, explodin together, like laser to missle
they copy my skill and style, just like they tracing a stencil
I expose this and show it begin to notice, all are so hopeless
so they know this, so i wrote this to show them my dopeness

(Flow Intelligent)
Im dope to the limit, have ya brain floatin and flippin
test me, im the best see, take notes when im spittin
if i havent beat you yet, just take a step in the line
wicked rhymes, twisted lines, thats wreckin ya mind
kids speak up, get put down, im the best at this shit
if you mess with my hits, ill have u stressed like a bitch
and if you beat me its only cuz you holdin on dicks
just a couple of cats, who know that, they're sick
Babylon, the flows intelligent, causing you anxiety
Reserve, a hearse, if you ever think of trying me


It's That Serious

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damn thats all i can say shit was fire. my fav. verse was Anxiety's the shit was ill. Everyone else was also hott. shit i gotta give it a 9/10 keep the shit kickin, check out my open mic "Too Fresh" hit me up with some feed.

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yo...shit was dope...nice collab...all veres was dope...that's all i really can say...is dope...nice drop to all...10/10

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Net Record(56-9)

RV Record(13-3)

Overall Record
69-12

thc for the feedback uppin for more

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anxiety:
that was stright dope good multis gave me a good flow twsita style ya knah...the stucture was super dope and so was the vocabulary jsut a tight drop from you i was straight feeling your part of it alot...just keep doing your thing casue you seem to drop hot with them metaphores n shit...just keep it up...

Babylon:
also you had a great verse i was feeling the stcutre was just perfect on touch...good vocabulary and very good creativty with vocabulary and metaphores very good drop from you too jsut keep doing your thang cuz you got skills to...

Flow:
man you came good to i was feeling your stucture and flow all you peoples had a same stucture and then the flow you gave flow was just good...the creativty was good it was all there...keep it up....and also flow what happend to the collab me and Limited Eddition got a new beat n shit thats better so holla on aim or something...pz

can all of you leave feed on my OM's if you havent i got a new one in my sig n shit so please do thanks peace

^^^damn...he took the words right out of my mouth......lol. well, since he broke it down pretty clearly for me....theres no need for me to repeat the same shit.

once again though fellas......all of you dropped sickness........i expected nothing less from y'all. good work gentlemen. one.

s.v.

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R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love.

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ups for my peeps and shit......................

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