Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 01-30-06 at 02:54 PM

Must drop verse in 2000 minutes after check in.

pictureperfect2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-06 01:56 PM.

SlicKnife has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-06 02:05 PM.

let me kill this boy right quick...
... ya feel me

Slick quit bein shit and pick up the fuckin phone
cuz if u don’t get the meassage I’ll put a bulletin ya dome
call u out in bitch slapped, ya u better answer
cuz i could win this battle with more shit than pampers
call yourself slicknife well I’ll put all that shit to shame
when I manhandle ya avy and cut ya 6 times with ya own name
all my rhymes be original comin straight off the dome
last time u thought out the box u were lookin for a new home
yeah ya punches are as broke as your pockets, its sad
closes u came to eatin facy swhen ya bitch got crabs

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yeah ya punches are as broke as your pockets, its sad
closes u came to eatin facy swhen ya bitch got crabs
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sposed to say fancy* and not facy there

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Pay the price for calling me out...bitch


Fuck, your not a threat...but really how can you shut up and manage...?
...When posting in Bitch Slapped...is the only time you put up a challenge
Not worth it see...you enjoy posting verses SO shoddy...
...But nobody is perfect.............its also true that Perfect is nobody!
The fuck are you, wait till I impale your skin & turn it around sick....
Sounds disgusting? now you know what we felt listening to your Soundclick!
Sticking stamps would not give you class...your forever disfigured...
But is RapVerse to blame...? when this fuckin P&P never delivers...!
I guess not...one bar could kill you, so I wrote this whilst busy but...
...next time they say Pictures worth a thousands words, say Nah...IS HE FUCK!

Voted For: SlicKnife

slic i voted for u had better rymes and punches and a better flow overall

pp2 u had better structure but wat killed u is that u put dome down twice in ur battle elavate

rtf
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Voted For: SlicKnife

SlicKnife:
Fuck, your not a threat...but really how can you shut up and manage...?
...When posting in Bitch Slapped...is the only time you put up a challenge
7/10 - Funny Opener.
Not worth it see...you enjoy posting verses SO shoddy...
...But nobody is perfect.............its also true that Perfect is nobody!
7/10 - Good Punchline.
The fuck are you, wait till I impale your skin & turn it around sick....
Sounds disgusting? now you know what we felt listening to your Soundclick!
6/10 - Good soundclick diss.
Sticking stamps would not give you class...your forever disfigured...
But is RapVerse to blame...? when this fuckin P&P never delivers...!
5/10 - meh.
I guess not...one bar could kill you, so I wrote this whilst busy but...
...next time they say Pictures worth a thousands words, say Nah...IS HE FUCK!
4/10 - Weak Closer.

29/50

You had a good verse, you started off with some good wordplay and strong punches, and it flowed well. - Good Verse.


pictureperfect2:
Slick quit bein shit and pick up the fuckin phone
cuz if u don’t get the meassage I’ll put a bulletin ya dome
4/10 - OK Opener.
call u out in bitch slapped, ya u better answer
cuz i could win this battle with more shit than pampers
5/10 - Good Punch.
call yourself slicknife well I’ll put all that shit to shame
when I manhandle ya avy and cut ya 6 times with ya own name
6/10 - Good Personal.
all my rhymes be original comin straight off the dome
last time u thought out the box u were lookin for a new home
4/10 - OK.
yeah ya punches are as broke as your pockets, its sad
closes u came to eatin facy swhen ya bitch got crabs
6/10 - Good Finisher.

25/50

You had an ok verse, your punches were hitten hard you used a good flow and some good personals.


OVERALL - This was a close battle but I give my vote to Slic. He had the better wordplay and punches. He also had a good flow, and a good verse. Picture, I have seen you come harder than this before, you should have tried usin more wordplay.


Vote-Slic

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Voted For: SlicKnife

lol............slickknife just murdered this kid.....


punches-S
Personals-S
Metaphors-s
Multies-None
Creativity-S

I Love Challenge Lines And Th Perfect Is Nobody...Shit Was Ill Slick.

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yo rtf in any of my battles yo.......................

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Voted For: SlicKnife

hmmmm mSK easily had the better punches and personals in this... he took this battle hands down...

Opner: SK
Closer: Pic
Punches: SK
Personals: SK
Creativity: SK
Complexity: SK
Enjoyment: SK

Vote: SK

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Voted For: pictureperfect2

Slick quit bein shit and pick up the fuckin phone
cuz if u don’t get the meassage I’ll put a bulletin ya dome
call u out in bitch slapped, ya u better answer
cuz i could win this battle with more shit than pampers

VS

Not worth it see...you enjoy posting verses SO shoddy...
...But nobody is perfect.............its also true that Perfect is nobody!

V./ PP.

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