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12-26-03, 10:49 PM
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Given Light
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My Structure
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Aight people say my structure sucks shit. I agree with them look at my record. They say I have decent vocab and some good lines and shit. I'm always losing because of my structure. Can someone help me out herre? I need some advice. I'm gonna end up with the shittiest record on herre. If you people could maybe throw in a few lines and such to show good structure, you know just as an example.
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12-27-03, 02:08 PM
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^will fuck you up
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^check ya pms.....................
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12-27-03, 02:20 PM
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Oh Word?
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It's simple really
Think of a punch then make a set up for it Blah blah blah Then follow with the punche blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah It'll usually come out like that. Now take the lines and arrange the words so the lines come out even Bla Blah Blah Bluh Blah bla lbah bloh
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12-27-03, 04:44 PM
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dont have to be a punch since it could be on open mics too anyway lines even xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx x xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx x /\ like that or so question answered please dont post anymore |
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12-28-03, 11:39 PM
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New to RB
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Who the fuck do you think you are a mod or something get da fuck out ..
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12-28-03, 11:42 PM
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Banned: Spamming
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If Emerge would get a step closer to Mod status.. Everytime someone said that..He'd be Admin by now.. |
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