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05-18-03, 09:20 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Death
Neva know when I’m a get stuck outta luck, Inhaling smoke n coughing until I reach my coffin, As I roam these streets intoxicated, I neva anticipated, that situations I would be facing could be near death related, Now my mind is only concentrated, on my survival, And my only chance of livin is to out live my rivals, And my arrival, to this world was unappreciated, That’s why all these cats want me assassinated, But not from the game of life but from this rap game, They want me to remain unknown and refrain, From reaching anywhere so now I must prepare, To lead the one man military murderous militia, This game is like a computer n I’m just another hard partition, Another upgrade another addition, That’s being chased down by the reaper of death, And I wont quit this until I have my last breath left, Until I cant step, until my legs fail-me until my arms are paralyzed, Until my brain is neutralized, until the evil is purified, And when death is upon me my superiors will say “Another hero has been sacrificed”. took me like 5-8 mins to write this one i kept it short |
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05-18-03, 09:28 AM | #2 | |||||||
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Thats some good Ish mun...Better than your other stuff...Got some nice flow in multi's there man...Good topic and lyrics.......Pz.......
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05-18-03, 09:31 AM | #3 | ||||||
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decent drop,
thought it flowed well, and you satyed on the topic! Until I cant step, until my legs fail-me until my arms are paralyzed, Until my brain is neutralized, until the evil is purified, And when death is upon me my superiors will say “Another hero has been sacrificed”. - that was tight! |
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05-18-03, 09:35 AM | #4 | ||||||
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yo thnx fo the comments.........n meadskillz when eva u reply to my shit u always say That was ur best work......well the truth is that like i elivate everytime i write and like my style sorta changes and seems better then before cuse it's like upgraded.............oh wel..........UPPING
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05-18-03, 09:35 AM | #5 | ||||||
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nice drop trill,liked the style,liked the way it flowd in my head,liked everything abou tit...should work on it and expand it out,its good so far
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05-18-03, 09:45 AM | #6 | ||||||
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yo thnx...........yea i might think of doin that.....i got like 3 pieces which i've only dun 1 verse.......cuse like i dont think it would go well with choruses and shit
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05-18-03, 10:19 AM | #7 | |||||||
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This was Tight , , , its truly audio material , wit a slow beat ,, , , Lines were onpoint , , ,tha verse went wit tha tittle , u did a great job here dawg
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05-20-03, 02:45 AM | #8 | |||||||
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Yeah nice drop i enjoyed it a bit shorter than your other ones though................................dope peice
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05-20-03, 02:48 AM | #9 | ||||||
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THNX>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>UPPIN
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05-20-03, 03:38 AM | #10 | ||||||
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thats some real stuff man, nice line ta end it. Good to see an aussie boy bustin ryhmes
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05-20-03, 09:08 AM | #11 | ||||||
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thnx, there are heaps of aussie rappers on this site.....meadskillz/treach p/morgdorg/Atetrack define'/inspire and a lot more.............................................. ....................................UPPING
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05-20-03, 09:16 AM | #12 | ||||||
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But not from the game of life but from this rap game,
They want me to remain unknown and refrain, From reaching anywhere so now I must prepare, To lead the one man military murderous militia, This game is like a computer n I’m just another hard partition, Another upgrade another addition, Trill another classic man, Keep spittin, I was feelin this, not bad for a quick write ...upps |
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05-20-03, 09:46 AM | #13 | ||||||
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thank u.......fuck i'm gettin so majorly slept on..........haha "TRILL ANOTHER CLASSIC MAN" now i get respected on a regular basis..........yo peeps drop links to yo shit cuse u know i'll check urs...............fuckin hell i reply to as amny thread a day as i can.......especially to ayw who need replies peeps with 0 replies..........and i just dont say "that was ill, i give constructive critism........oh well.....UPPPING
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05-20-03, 10:28 AM | #14 | |||||||
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That was phat as hell
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05-23-03, 07:21 AM | #15 | ||||||
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yo thnx for replyin to mine.........i'm still gettin slept....................................>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>><<<<>>><><><><><><><><><><><><>><><<><><><><><><><>
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