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08-03-04, 01:09 AM
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Under the moon trying to thunder a tune with a guitar
IP: 005F B7E2
Under the moon trying to thunder a tune with a guitar
Can’t git far with the song bazaar girl come along hot like a lit star My cap brown but she wore a wraparound mini-skirt Precise fit, nice tits, lips red, hips shaped walk and flirt Butt round skin yellow and soften voice mellow often alert Had rust in my plan with just one hand want to grab her waist Have at lace her body designed for work, doomed by her perfume White diamond wanna swim in delight like a salmon where’s her room? |
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08-03-04, 02:46 AM
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IP: 88E6 6CAA
hmm,this was short n a bit wierd...i found some lines were missing words or jus dint make sense dawg like this:last 3 lines :
Had rust in my plan with just one hand want to grab her waist Have at lace her body designed for work, doomed by her perfume White diamond wanna swim in delight like a salmon where’s her room? i did'nt get this at all......maybe you should explain it.... |
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08-03-04, 03:12 AM
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IP: 28AD 5545
Same here,,,but keep doing your thing,,,Im digging your style,,,,Just work on your words abit better,,So it can be understood,,I understood some of it,,,
but like dv8 said ,some of It didnt make since...God bless all,,,but believe in your self, It really dont matter what I think,,,Its really what you think,,,keep doing your thing....1
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