dis one aint nuttin serious i was juss messin round

u should see me wit dese gurl how i conversate,
and when i battle these fools how i dominate,
and how im on da rate,when u gon to hate,
betta watch cause i screwed ya wife,
and if i had another chance i do it twice,
me and my crew gon kill yo click,
gurls all on me cause my game so sick,
betta watch out aint no safety button,
still wanna mess round then ill show u sumthin,
as u can see im rappin fast,
walkin past gurls and im grabbin ass,
im smokin stuff and sellin drugs,
hangin wit bad people includin thugs,
i dont no wrong from rite and rite from wrong,
but in da next couple days probably locked up and probably gon,


man dis rite hurr is some wack shit i juss typed
i was juss bored and puttin shit togetha really quick
but still give me some feed back

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ey muthafuka's give me some feed bac

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it wasn't bad for sumthin' u say u was bullshittin' around with.
oh and if u want us to think ur works good u gotta feel like its good.if u think it's whack urself then watchya think ur gonna get bak for feeds
"it was gr8"?
stay up and be confident about ur work,take pride in it,even if ur jus' shittin' around.ever herd the sayin' "one mans garbage is another mans treasure."
think about and drop some fire in here,aight.one

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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE

lol...aiight thanx for da advise..holla

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The flow was there nicely,concept was average n the rhyme scheme still needs work though. Keep at it, I c improvement in every new post.

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not bad not bad......nice and quick need more word play......keep it up

nice rhyming nigga check my shit home boi.

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Back.....

thanx for da feedbac yall..holla..

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Yo you doing your thing an thats all that counts,,i give it a 7-10
nice drop hommie

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My level of battle
is your problem.
Not minds.
So dont toss me
till to you tried me.
This is my ring.
You cant box me.
I'll drop rocky.
I've climbed the mountain's
Making all contenders obsolete.
All you bitches is running like
water fountain
knocking me!!

Defeat list
Young Beezy
out come:5-o
Lost Battles:none
out come
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