yo......yo......lets rip this

yeah its me the 1 and only r,o double b ya c im litraly the best mc and i can take any1 on easily count to 3
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yeah this rap should be rated r restricted ya c this bullet hole in my neck its self inflicted,im a stick figre with a dick bigga than any nigga,push me any more and i'll pull this trigga and leave a hole in ya head the size of a crater and then wake wit a headache 10 minuites later
how may thing can i ryme wit ator?
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8 or 9 afta 10 i can hardley tell da time
now get out the way original bad boy on the case came in the place and sprayed puffy wid mace oh u want me 2 stop in that case i'll carry on stay on the mic while i drop this bomb

yeah........ R*O*B*B* in ta muthafukin house

so wot did ya think

yo is any 1 gonna reply

Not feeling it at all.. work on structure or sumthing.. and try to elevate your flow. i had to stop and re read a few things to semi-understand it.

ok thnx

it was ok keep workin