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Old 04-06-05, 09:49 PM   #1
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Given Light Vs. Hells Fire

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Topic: Empty Feeling

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Old 04-06-05, 10:10 PM   #2
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Alright checking in........

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Old 04-06-05, 11:39 PM   #3
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checkin in jea good luck to the kat on the other side of this its gonna be hot
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Old 04-10-05, 07:05 PM   #4
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Empty Feeling

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Hole in my heart, empty inerds, coelom clearness
night of the dark, creepy suberbs, see-mom dearness
double vision mom tryin to shuffle thoughts
trouble tension mom workin to little boughts
dry heavin moms sorrow bring tears to dark
try sleepin moms burrow bring frears to shark
empty feelin lyin on a couch, saint mary icu
empty cealin white n grouch, faint momy icu
white as a pillow, white as marrow, white as death no
weep as a willow, bite the nillow, tears to meth oh
pain no facial expression watchin deaths tension
wain to graceful depression watchin wealths pension
empty like some one shot me full of holes left to die
empty like some one stoll mom and didnt tell me why
walkin zombie lookin for warm blood and a bit of hope
watchin momie takin from dorm room and get the hope
may-o in rodchester built by fields of cows and the fester
say-o in rodchester guilt why meals of wows and the easter
no eggs no candy no baskets just letters n prayers for placement
no begs no brandy no cash kept just nurses n chairs for nice rent
dreams haunt and tease no ounce or cubit of sleep
beams taunt and breeze no rounds or shit for sleep
grades suffer indepression set to buffer
paides suffer cardsbleston bet to bluffer
drinks get bigger and stress goes with time
winks get bigger and brests hoes no time
no motivation no addrenaline ventation
no sensation no mental line stagnation
i need to get out of this empty bliss
i need to get out to give momy akiss
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Old 04-12-05, 09:44 AM   #5
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Hells Fire wins due to no show.

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