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ah'ight then son you drop first^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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When are you going to drop something^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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Come on son drop something already damn!!!!!!!!!!!!

I Make Kids Flip-N-Bend,Dont Come With Simple Tens
Cuz When Sten. Contends,His Skills Triple_N's
Your Old News,Ill Beat This MC Cubed & Rock This Blockhead
Ill Bruise This Newb & With Ease-Droppin More Lines Than The Feds
Tis True He Sucks,Ill Cover Him With Sheets Like The Klux
These Blows Dont Duck But Ill Drop This Dick Like A Kick In The Nuts
Either I Smell A Win By Far Or Its Your Scripts In The Garbage...
But You Could Breech Wit Screech's & Still Couldnt Bring Ur Smartest

I Was Watchin A Movie Again...My Bad

I Cut It Short

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You style is old an played out like "patti labelle"/
You impersonate an emcee better than "dave chappelle"/
Your ryhmes are weird an unclear like the movie "others"/
I'll take this win, say thank ya plz, like pops from "wayne's brothers"/
This nigga's a fool, a blockhead this bitch callz me/
Its cool, cuz I know he stole his name from Dragonball Z/
I give ya props u spit for all ya worth, but sorry welcome to eath/
You punches are lighter that nerf, an your delivery is similar to papa smurf/
I'm too sick for you, doctors inject me into people as a vacination/
For u no vendication, or ego inflation, stick wit ya best talent "masterbation"/


Didn't really put much effort into it, so don't really know how it's gon' turn out but good battle...may the best mothafucka win, one!

triple N, hands down winner dog, that was sick
those lines were flowing like wonkas chocolate

He did not poll.. now need 25 posts to be able to poll. If he comes back and polls without giving a better explanation, it will be removed
-strobe

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Sten: You had nice flow, but punches fell of pretty bad towards the end. The closer was decent, but your second and third bars were just pretty weak.

I Make Kids Flip-N-Bend,Dont Come With Simple Tens
Cuz When Sten. Contends,His Skills Triple_N's

^^ that's hot, nice word play, personal, everything. best bar of the battle.

triple n: nice multis, i see you elevating there, flow got better because of that. the problem is your punches. the first line was ok, 2-4 were just weak for me. i think you gotta use more setup lines so you can get some depths in those punches or something.. the way it is its just like 4 straight disses, and none are particularly great.
the dragon ball Z one was a pretty good personall, and your closer was ok. but man, that second to last line:

I'm too sick for you, doctors inject me into people as a vacination/

man that's weak. the second part has nothing to do with sten, so the set up is kinda wasted. also, people inject dead versions of disease or weak versions of disease as vaccination, so its like your saying your weak or something. i think that kinda killed the verse for me.

tight battle guys, especially for this few lines. really close, but for that nice openener by sten and for the wordplay i give sten the vote.

holler back on my battle v franchiZe.

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

I Make Kids Flip-N-Bend,Dont Come With Simple Tens
Cuz When Sten. Contends,His Skills Triple_N's

oooooooooooooo i think this line killed it dog.
amazin opener and a nice personal

his punches hit a lil harder.

triple n u had a nice line too

Your ryhmes are weird an unclear like the movie "others"/
I'll take this win, say thank ya plz, like pops from "wayne's brothers

im a fan of ya shit triple n. you got mad respect from me since we battled

but i have to give this to sten

no beef,

return the favour pls
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...31&page=1&pp=15

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can you vote in my battle pls
i took time to vote 4 u
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119431

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