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Old 10-04-05, 06:50 AM   #1
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Old 10-04-05, 07:31 PM   #2
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Born in the slums, playin hoop is my hobby
Found this round object, in my front lobby
To big to be quick, to big to play good
Gosh im real scared, its my first time in the hood
Gloomy player in the making, time to go eat
Fuck playing basketball..gutta get my ass off the street
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Old 10-06-05, 06:09 AM   #3
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Got the game tatted on my soul
Slowly i roll, gloomy patrol, the streets only know
Hungry, nobody can tell me what i cant do
The hate makes a hole big enough to shoot a hoop through
What would you do? i'm know it's whats inside that count
But i cant make an amount if live on doubt
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Old 10-06-05, 09:17 AM   #4
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The courts been deserted all the players fled away
So i guess by dreams crushed for joinin the NBA
loud sirens r wailing i'm hearing screams and shouts
i guess my fat ass shoulda stayed off the court...no doubt
Played tight on me couldnt get past him at any place
Damn...why'd i go and shoot that nigga in the face.....
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Old 10-09-05, 05:56 PM   #5
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Here stands a still statue, lay the soldier infused in taboo,
see the skull imprinted with failure, along with his tattoos.
Uncanny how he's standing, his head's slumped in shame,
step once, step twice, disturbing dew drops and the rain.
The cracked asphalt held cloaked deeds and standing sin,
metallic motions matching the main function of mannequins.
His feelings rest across his chest, encased in his rib cage,
all the dreams from the NBA reduced to this min. wage....
But where the sin lay, burned in focus the truth delivered,
splinters and fragments having tales of summer and winter.

Delay this sinner, allow the passage for this poor moron,
don't make this empty shell stationary, for time to gorge on.


Create a winner, focus through the bad memories of a casket,
allow the net of pain to be swished away by the cracked basket.
Remember these past matches, in the way I know that you do?
Remember the occassion with the tricks and flips I showed you?
Woah dude, don't let go and don't sit here weeping lost tears,
try to remember the ghost in the ways of our long gone years.

Giving up, something you never did man, not when I played,
I always wondered, why when I told you to run you stayed.
Those were the good days, aye, when we weren't hiding;
I left this on your answering machine so you could find me.
Remember, it's my fault, not yours that we forgot the ball,
and even to my captors, I'm glad the guards gave me one call.

That's you man. I gotta go.






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Old 10-09-05, 09:26 PM   #6
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To clarify, the beginning is the guy waiting for his friend, and the italics is the phone call saying the guy he's waiting for is in jail.
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Old 10-10-05, 05:36 PM   #7
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as i walk through the shadows of the basketball courts
i never expected this way of life, to be a blood sport
crushin the floor with the though of, "make this one shot"
turned out, the reason of dismay is the cause of one glock
poppin, poppin, there's no reason to cry
cause insanity just kicked in, and im the reason he died
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Old 10-14-05, 04:11 PM   #8
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Alone i stand playing ball
no one around me atall
alow am big,am feeling small
cause this is the game i love,and i hear the hoop call
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Old 10-15-05, 08:58 PM   #9
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Out of all the models produced i was the 23rd
Absurd how the hell'd i came about, complaints were plenty heard
The 22 before stood high with a musclar frame
Height the same, but everything else about me screamed lame
I'm bald and i've been called fat by the other kids
Behind my back but i heard......emotionally it's another hit
My whole purpose surrounds this lil orange sphere
My sense of non belonging makes my eye release a tear
My head drops as i tried to contemplate my fate
Then i crack a smile...."i wonder how my ankles hold my weight?"


(couldn't resist lol)

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Old 10-16-05, 06:05 PM   #10
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Basketball was his dream shot hoops everyday thought once he'd play carmello anthony.
pondering upon the cement debris in this dark gloomy city when all I want is MJ's jersey.
feels like jail with barbwire fences my hood cant fix this court with any expences.
footsteps leading me a step closer to the day I succed wonder If I got a sixth sense
Got batman on my shirt havn't changed in a week and im filled with dirt.
I Gave up everything thinking that I was gonna play basketball im hurt.
Just realizing im 19 years old and if i want this "Dream"to happen ima act fast.
a week later Got signed by the Bulls my team so happy I signed the contract.
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Old 10-20-05, 07:46 PM   #11
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He's dreaming of dreams, wants to make it pro..
..his status- low..
but one day, he sees himself starring the show..

devoted is he, does nothin else..besides eat, sleep, n breathe..
..the perfect example, that you can make it big in the streets
raised a hoodlum, exposed to trouble, it wasn't good son..
..the type of kid that rushed to the table when the foods done
Took one meal a day, in no way was that fair for this youth..
..Financially unstable was an understatement, & that was the truth

Had 23 reasons for makin it big.. not stoppin' 'till reachin his tittle..
..This dude even shaved his head... just to carbon copy his idol
He had the shot of a jordan..
......this overweight fuck could make the net bend
...But let's be real,
we all know his road to success eventually reached a dead end.
No cliche's or fairy tales, this is reality at its finest..
Another kid from the hood......
.....................labeled as trouble, so that's a minus
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Old 10-27-05, 09:32 PM   #12
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Looking down at my feet, This crazy night im all alone/
Aiming to strike some hoops, in tha basketball zone/
No Shit going down, i feel "Gloomy" as-hell/
Playa no not me, my red tee tells it un-well/

I WOULD DO MORE.. BUT I AINT A GUD LYRICALIIST BUT IF U WANNA HELP MAKE DIZ FEMALE BIG HOLLA AT ME CAUSE MA TALENT JUST WANTS TA POP OUT!! AHAHAA HOLLA BAYBEE T
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Old 10-27-05, 09:34 PM   #13
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AND RAH JUST WANNA BIG UP IllIST U GOT SUM SKILLZ BOY!! HOLLA AT CHA GURL!! X X
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Old 10-30-05, 11:34 AM   #14
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the crack of the slums pavment i stay standin on where the bums pray opon //
for days and hours i stayed on this court think of lyrics of songs/
trying to make it isnt a 99.9 perctnet change //
but if a nigga want is theres a 99.9.9 that im pull it out and we gonna dance//
23 tateed on myhead homies 23 was th cell i held my blood in//
im a blood in c town wit jail time on my chest again //
ight after night i held my head low and said noting//
faggits fucking and races shit being a pace of shit mexicans bucking//
i recall teh visions in my head of when the night begone //
i shot back after being atteacked put his mouth on the side walk and made him lose his touge//
what i wouldnt give to change the past cuss every night i got to watch my back //
along with my familiy i would go crazy if they got clapped//
so i found my self her on the court with my dreams in my hands//
well i stand still think where im at and relize im a man //
witrh true coloers shine throw to analixy the world in a booth //
becaasu when i say i love the game i say uit with pashion i say it with truth
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