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07-16-02, 10:30 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Im new to this site/but not new to the streets
im hear to say a lot of yall ryhmes are weak try ta flow back on second thought btch u betta just delete yall cant compete wit me its serious my flowz got yall so shaked up u delirious i throw mo bows than luda so go home and pray to ya buda(buddists) my ryhmes pack mo power than a mine just remeber Que is here ta steal ya dymes so pack up ya nines cuz i come in peace nah truth is im here to icrease the deceased so when u type my name count it as defeat ------------------------------------------------------ this is just a quick 12 bar tell me what i need ta work on |
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07-16-02, 10:42 PM | #2 | ||||||
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i need to see more of ya work...so far you aight...jus expand that vocab..and do tha unexpected..
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07-16-02, 10:55 PM | #3 | ||||||
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yeah you aiight son..
i can't tell you "do this, do that" cuz i'm a newbie.. but stay active kid! .1. |
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07-17-02, 06:23 AM | #4 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: CE07 81DB
it's good for a start it's kinda short but it flowed well the volcab wasn't anything special but it's a nice peice
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