My birth certificate reads my destineys copywritten.
My ortopsy will read.. infringment.. death by being bitten.
dissen me is a felony-punishable by the death penalty-
locking me in a fire proof booth to murder you by degree.
burn you to debree-when you battle me-
you can feel and see- the definity of a hot m.c.
my every verse disbursed is done by tri~logy.
Wack wanna b’s experience my abusive delivery. (1)
Punchlines combine to be assault an battery-(2)
Fallowed by each line to your mind as a verbal sadomy.(3)
The pre~equal was vicious.Each sequel- is more evil-
Mic fiends will O.D. usen my cd’s for crack needles.
I shit spit with an onslaw of bars to hard to keep in my jaw-
Fucken you up in 3rd person like a menajetwa.
So call your whole crew to fight the one man armada-
If they don’t belive im a MIC lords’ mantra-
I’ll leave them with jesus stigamata.
Being persecuted by being muted-
Your songs wouldn’t down load if I rebooted.
Looking for subject matter? Quite simply it’s disaster-
To answer……The meaning is demeaning-
my flows hot leaven my mouth steaming-
once I start streaming.
My lungs are guns I stay strap with heaters-
Tucked underneith my wife~beaters-
For instanceYour words wouldn’t travel my distance
measured miles to kilometers-
Feet to centimeters-fractions to decimeters-
crack your face with a track hook and see if your hemophiliac bleeder.
Ive sonned half the industry I styles like a ferternal breeder.
Who elsy you no can go deeper?
Using the laws of astrphysics-to crash your fly gimics?
MURDER A MIMIC- SO FAST I GET SPEEDING TICKETS-
FOR BREAKING THE SPEED LIMITS.

I take this talking about a linguist. .I was relating to most of this piece. .Some more than others but they were all very well written. .

My birth certificate reads my destineys copywritten.
My ortopsy will read.. infringment.. death by being bitten

That was a great opening. .

The wordplaywas here as usual & I felt you upped your vocab on this. .Another good read WP. .Keep it up & I'm keeping this up

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The wordplay and flow is on point as usual. You got some sick lines like this one- "Mic fiends will O.D. using my CD's for crack needles". Your one in a million. One+

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good drop WP, your flow was good, very easy to follow, your punhes were ill, your starting line and your ending line was very creative i think that made it for a good read, also your vocab and wordplay was better then usual...that was tight....good drop man 9/10

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more good stuff
wasnt quite as good as ive seen from u previously but still no let down
some of the flows in there were really dope

'The pre~equal was vicious.Each sequel- is more evil-
Mic fiends will O.D. usen my cd’s for crack needles
^great lines

'My lungs are guns I stay strap with heaters-
Tucked underneith my wife~beaters
^more hot flow and nice bit of imagery

and the opener was a good way to introduce the verse
stay doing that shit

Wack wanna b’s experience my abusive delivery. (1)
Punchlines combine to be assault an battery-(2)
Fallowed by each line to your mind as a verbal sadomy.(3)
The pre~equal was vicious.Each sequel- is more evil-
Mic fiends will O.D. usen my cd’s for crack needles.

Very good wordplay..work on the spellin a little bit...but this flow was like water....just mad smooth and ill all the way through...nice drop

thank you im elevaten top rep my omens properly

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