Sometimes I forget what the light looks like when I'm clouded by shadows of my indecencies, the past, by the things that i have done and seen.....
Am i forgiven?
It is hard to tell in the dark with my mind, a candle, and no match,
I could step out and follow my own direction but i hear 2 voices that whisper in my mind, is this the guiding light i so desperately seek to find?.....
Am i forgiven?
It is hard to tell, when i cannot decipher this or that, what is what and who is true...then i hear a second voice....step out and smile cuz it's you......
***written about the love of my life***
For helping me through rough times

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"QUOD ME NUTRIT, ME DESTRUIT--AUT VINCERE AUT MORI"

O Y D

*FluidMusic*


*Poetic Scriptures Moderator*

I really liked it. There was no actual structure, but you knew when each "stanza" was over. The imagery in it was really good. I loved the part about the second voice.. Keep it up man.

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I'll wait for you there
where the sun doesn't shine
Wait for you there
where the shadows run from themselves

u aint forgiven lol

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