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07-05-06, 07:51 PM | #1 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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"Holy Terror"...new conceptual from ya boyeeeeeeeeeeee...holla
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^Click on "Holy Terror" Concept: Venting anger in a creative way...something conceptual Holla 1 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230950 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230973 |
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07-05-06, 09:00 PM | #2 | |||||||
Broke as hell
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nice one here Q.....
i like the flow of course..you always got good switch ups to keep it intresting... the beat..hahah....on that belly dancin shit..hahaha...nice nice.. hook isn't tha bad either...could of came with a tad bit more energy there i feel...but other then that this track was hot like summer man....keep it up
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07-05-06, 10:07 PM | #3 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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Word.....interested to hear what you got....lol.
Beat's nice.....waaaaaaay different. I'm feeling this one man. Hook's catchy.....Flow's nice too....not your normal flow, which is good to change up from time to time. This was a little more of a slower flow from you, but it came out with more emotion to it. Definitely a hot one man.....good shit
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07-06-06, 03:31 AM | #4 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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07-06-06, 08:14 AM | #5 | |||||||
El Padrino
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lol @ indian horns.... im high... so... dont mind me....
peepin ... damn this beat is funky.... Loaded wit cholestoral.... haha hook bouncy catchy like flow over this on point... i dont think i coulda rocked this ... but you did your thing over it.... the last hook hits lil harder.... cuz the beat kinda fades out... only the horn goin... kinda slick like.... and then the beat comes back... lol.... solid mayne.... keep droppin
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07-06-06, 01:50 PM | #6 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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07-06-06, 05:18 PM | #7 | ||||||
...Closer Look...
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lol @ the indian w/e...
this is soft..i was xpecting some hard/raw beat..but yeah i'm liking it..ur flow was on a st8line...like ur emotion was like indefferent in it...but atleast it was steady u didnt fall off at no spot!...lyrics r hell yeah ironic and creative..decent...hook is nice..sounds like an anthem typa stuff..nice job here.. Hit my 'xtasy' thanx
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07-06-06, 05:32 PM | #8 | |||
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those horns sound different the beat is aight but yeah ionno lyrics and flow is cool i like your topic its pretty cool yeah the horns is killin it fo me dont like it at all.....hook is cool....second verse flow is coo adlibs done propa lyrics is cool as well delivery is always there...aight hook comes in....nice drop my dude stay up rtf
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07-06-06, 06:49 PM | #9 | |||||||
Light Weight
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Listenin' LOL at the intro, shit is pretty nice actually...I like how it hit in the beat, word this bit is real native and ethnic im definitely feelin...Im rlly feelin the horns, flow is real hot the multis are holdin u up again, movin on real nice..nice quick flow...hook is catchy and nicely mixed..im def feelin the topic..creative lyrics..
Ima do how u do it cos its good: What's good: Flow, multis, delivery, hook, catchy What's not: No switch in the flow, nothin else.. Il download this nice ass track http://community.rapverse.com/showt...189#post2787189 can you rtf
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07-06-06, 09:42 PM | #10 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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thank you all for the feedback
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07-07-06, 03:23 AM | #11 | |||||||
10:23 till i'm 86
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i dig the beat... thats always in movies havin anything to do with middle east.. catchy like ya chorus... how many tracks do u use on your chorus?? lyrics aint as creative as i thought, but like how the last set of chorus's come in... shit be dope,,, lyrics more topical, put a vision in ya head like that dancin round a fire and jazz... i dig how the chorus kinda comes out of no where just come ova ya lyrics// kinda need to either repeats some of ya lyrics durin ya verse or put more adlibs in at times so it doesn't get boring... but word good drop... returnt he favor on my song "cats pajamas" pzz
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07-08-06, 05:16 PM | #12 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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07-08-06, 07:04 PM | #13 | ||||
Hell yeah
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weird track man, beat is pretty cool, lyrics dope, nice opener, love it, flow is cool, quality is pretty decent, loveee the hook, dunno why, really different, second verse is really dope too, im downloading this track, 10/10 seriously, dope drop
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07-09-06, 04:57 AM | #14 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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