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no crew d.r vote

yo....

Dawg you should stick to doin audio,the only way you get credit
But ya verses be commercial talkin bout shit thats aesthetic
you experiencin turbulence, caused by verbal abuse
Will you spittin weak shit.............ya lyrics are obtuse
my bars will have you restricted like a VA precint
you promotin weak rap, damn there goes ya secretion
Past documents show you have a borin identity
im the leader of ya trinity....you about to lose this battle but thats ur normal tendency
its The Street Legend handin out equal distributions
im winnin nigga.......you need help go to a lyrical instituion
you must be dreamin.....thinkin you gonna win this is reality
wake up.......you cant come at me wit a boastin mentality

^^^weak lol

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u washed upp like shores, i come up aboard taking battle credits on mics and keyboards from u herbs,wacko's and brauds
extord your cord into the jack in the wall, log in and witness the greatest ass whoopin u ever saw..
u fallin like blowjob chic mouth jaw, get yo cranuim pounded on with a heavy animal south paw, on my hands installed
screw to my wrist.. fo brawl
u aint the shit, u just piss alot of textcee's off with ur half ass wackness you bring...
you better off doing ja rule karoke's and ur sister to play ashanti to sing
you claim to be a legend in the streets but you aint even known in ur OWN city
even your OWN hood dont respect you, and thats a pitty..very grimey and shittie
haha u aint streets, you peeps spoiled you like a crack head tittie
u aint got no friends, u played the outkast in ur school class
12 th grade prom year, still no ass.. damn u trash
call em oscar the grounch in garbage patch disposer..u prolly copy and paste my shit in ur document folder..and re post my verse for to another site..cuz here, ur career over

up...................

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Both had good verses I thought it was almost a tie both had flow, punches, personals etc really hard to deside

Openor: Young
Structure: SL
Punches: Both
Personals; SL
Enjoyed: Both
Came hard: Both
Closer: Both
Vote: SL

Sl got the win cuz young had to much stretched lines good battle but sl won cuz of that both verses were a lil abouve average

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A crip just like Bonecollector

SL-Pretty Even and Good concept but aight verses and
pretty Much had Structure leaving Flow good but Overall aight
verses not weak or Hard

VS-Lol..ya Structure was messed and I couldnt Read it So Mainly
I couldnt read nothing But Flow was messed and Not Much good
punches but ya Structure Blew it..LOl

v/SL

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up............

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damn man up........

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Yo my vote go to young. I read both and in my opinion young hit harder than Steet.
Both had some good punches but I think Young hit him harder in this battle.

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Bdddddat lame cats get hit the fuck up so if you wanna talk get the fuck up and breathe easy.

sl:you had good vocab n decent structure your flow was alot easier ta read n overall i think ya had the better verseyour punches were aight,dint notice any good personals..
young:you had really bad text structure,some good ideas but you ruined your verse the way you worded your lines n laid it out....im gonna havta give this 1 ta sl cause of his punches n structure ....
vote/sl
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