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02-11-06, 07:09 PM | #1 | ||||
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Intermental - Young n' Opressed
IP: 8E7A 53B5
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This is the outro of my mixtape: Soul Rebel Volume 1 "Young n' Opressed" A Quite emotional song...so means alot to me this feed....ill rtf..1 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221763 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220364
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02-11-06, 07:59 PM | #2 | ||||
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IP: 8E7A 53B5
upppin...............
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02-11-06, 11:08 PM | #3 | |||
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lol @ you usin that beat with the funky sample at the start
sample sucks I guess the extreme opposite of my "my name is tha q" sample beat is okay though personal lyrics,,,was feeling them However, don't cry "foul" too much dawg...do you have it THAT bad, really? flow is cool all the elements are there not a bad track 1 |
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02-11-06, 11:42 PM | #4 | |||||
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IP: 8733 3D5C
The beat is pretty good, nice and mellow with a great vibe to it. first thing I noticed was that you have a decent sound but your voice blends to much. Idk what the problem is but it's hard to understand you, it's not your pronounceation but it's something else. turn the vocal volume up a bit maybe I'm not sure man. your verses are ok but like when you do adlibs and shit thats when it's effected most, you should turn down the adlib volume a bit or give them a different effect to amke them sound different. your lyrics were very good, and the storyline was very to the point. the hook was decent, I thought it coulda been better but it's alright.
rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221910 1
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02-12-06, 07:59 AM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: C369 89DD
Aight
You Shoulda Cut Out The Sample Though Beats Dope Though Werd to you using my hook settings Feeling the hook,emotional FLows dope,delivery koo...suits the track,feeling your emotion in it...the lyrics are good,you suit this beat,you blend in to it,your presence is koo,its laid back a lil more, i like how u experimenting with the hook settings..works well,liking the outro echo Good Outro! Keep Up Fam
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