aight if this one gets slept on i will never post in here ever again...lol


foriegn explorer, warning reporters of tortured orbits/
reforming the sources, born in the corals that scorched the waters/
Narcicyst stretches of travel, pattled in channels/
entrapped in capsules panelled in battles for maps of castles/
revolve like an axil, spin like a dradle thru ancient fables/
enabled and playful, stapled in cables, my flames are painful/
like naval offenses, pensively dented from independence/
intended to mend us, men that pretended to protect us/
my intentions for mortals, over mobiles, i buy coastal with noval/
proposals that told more horrors than mutated specimans in Chenorbyl/
i seen the hunger thru blurry lenses/
defence is government clenches and laughs over family pensions/
defining your horrid expenses of nuclear weapons/
so i keep sharper senses, so as not to be the next rotting in trenches/
precisity beckons, but i block it out in seconds/
i could transend into specteral dimensions thru astro projection/
a murderers fate has caused my morbid state/
and i question my actions...now am i deserving this hate/

Everytime I read your post I feel like I'm back in school getting another vocabualry lesson lol. But its alwaysa tight one. Keep posting I'm reading even if no one else is . OoNnEe

thanks girl...good looking out namsayin...i dont know why it might be the complexity but im not sure maybe i suck at poetry lol...maybe they aint ready for me...anyways thanks again.....wahid

Nice vocab, though I'm not sure how some of that relates to bein slept on but nice complexity within it....

thanks...nah it has nothin to do with gettin slept on its just if this poem gets slept on i aint postin in here again