Aight dawg...let's get this thang started:
10-25 lines
no dr, hatin votes
Crew votes allowed
First to 5 poll votes winz
U SPIT FIRST
Good luck dawg!

808 to 809 u just another number in the servin line//
your doin fine but its time to wreck minds with my tech 9//
You’ll be tragically slain by one my ferocious moves//
It’s funny, they’ll all be saying my shit and won’t be quoting you//
I know you’ll lose, don’t deny my words//
You say you’ll give me an L? I don’t buy that Herb//
I’ve seen more waste lay under me than a leather belt//
You’re fabricated lines were never “felt”//
I’ll cast you out, throw the fist to bash your mouth//
This proves I’m the nicest cat with the name you can’t pronounce//
You’re a high goal setter, but really, you aint so clever//
You must have been here before I came, or you would’ve known better//


sorry for the confusion i just copied and pasted my spit ... good luck

Dat's kool dawg. I'll drop it later on tonite pacific time cuz I gotta go somewhere right now. So I'll drop it later on toninte. Imma bout to log off right now so peace!

Aight I'm Back and Checkin in. here's my verse:

Now I know dis is pretty mean pickin on a newbie/
But he's da one who called out, accepted my request, and pmed me jus like a typical rookie/
So imma have ta straight this dawg out and put em in his place wit da rest of the pathetic new incoming emcee's/
That was a nice poem dawg, but remember were emcee battlin/
Were not exchangin luv letters, and plus I'm straight yo, not a faggot/
Boy, no way in hell u got game to get a girl, she jus need ta take 1 look atchya and she starts laughin/
The only game, and fun u got is playin wit urself under yo bed sheets and blanket/
Ur jus like every other newbie i battled, some nice rhymes but no hard punches/
U beatin me is like the Nets tryin to beat da Lakers last year in da ship (championship), it's hopeless/
Aftah dis battle, u mine as well retire cuz I'm leavin ya jawless/
So be cautious, cuz u gettin me obnoxious, and my skills are startin 2 get flawless/
I'm chargin hard straight at ya like a credit card chargin towards merchandise in da market/
G~Code losin ta 808...50 bucks,G~Code bein my bitch...$125 and 50 cents/
G~Code gettin shut down while talkin shit and have it all back-fired...priceless/
Now it's time fo me ta deminish u, make u cross-dress, hit u right in the chest, drippin each punch on u so hard u wouldn't know it hit ya like water drippin 4um the faucet/
Droppin multiple punches on yo head, yo hair will look colorful, makin u confess dat now u look uglier than Dennis Rodman wit more femness/(femanime=faggot)
I admit, dat was an aight rhyme, fo a dawg dat's new to dis/
NOT! Jus kiddin, dat was jus like every other newbie's first battle, worth nothin but shit/
Now shorty, right before I end dis verse and see the score between us wit MC 808: 5 poll votes, and G~Codes votes: None/
Let me give u a code dat u can understand: 0-1~0-1~0-1~0-1~0-1/

Vote on this shit and i'll come back with an honest vote:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=55642

Uppin fo POLL VOTES. Remember yall, be sure ta poll vote aftah ya explain yo votes. So uppin^^^^^^

Yo MC took this one but let me explain my vote:

G code - Your rhymes were average man it was jus another newb spit, but nice try, your rhymes didn't really make a whole lot of sense.... but make em longer and flo beta and you'll elevate.....

MC - Man your spits are elvating..... but you need tio make it rhyme dawg to make it flo beta ya feel???
So jus put in mopre punches and rhyme it a bit bveta n ull elevate even more iite man

So my vote = MC 808

Peace

Thanx dawg fo da vote. Appreciate da pointer and shit. Much respekt. Uppin fo more votes dawgs. Come on yall. Let's get dis thang goin. I see enuff users online to poll vote dis shit. And I know yall readin dis shit, so vote please.

on the real...

dont talk about guns...

MC had complexity and i liked his more....

my vote is MC................
>>>>>>>>>>>>>.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>.

Thanx Kapone. LEt's go man. 2-0, and uppin fo more yall. Vote one this, and I'll be sure to return da favor.

mc808 go check my battles out wit' warlord, zainy, and e- syde thug and i'll hit this back up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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mc took dis one easy...wordplay, complexity, vocab........everything was better........g code was pretty good for a newbie...but.as i was told when was a newbie.......ELEVATE..................was a little plain........

vote=mc 808....

Yo juggernaut, u can poll vote ya know. So can u do me a favor and do dat. Appreciate da vote though dawg. Uppin fo more votes^^^^^^^

MC 808 go this
vote=MC 808!!!!!!!!!
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