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Unfinished. As-usual, short.
But I'm sick of waitin for people to drop there verse's.

So untill then. Here....

Drop me sum FeedBack. -1

Yo- your riding the beat real nicely... I can't realy understand what ur sayin cuz ur vocals are too low, but Im feelin this beat, its really powerful in the beginning- makes it even harder to understand ur verse there, it gets a little easier to decipher you but not 100%... vocals sound like their decent from what I make out-- a little ssssssey though, Im sure the lyrics are on point... fix the volume on this and I wanna peep again cuz it sounds pretty nice other than that so far... Peep my shit im droppin in like 10 minutes .

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lol...this is dope,cant wait to hear it when its done....1

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Damn Car....get this shit finished....

lol i remember when u showed me on aim

Cant wait to hear finish product

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fucking nice.... cant wait till' its done...

beat is nice. I was feelin' it. yea, beat kinda drowns out yo vocals. caught a "Multiply my time hundred times line" lol nice one. But nice flow on this. This beat sick. lol nice shit. Got easier to hear near the end. Can't wait till finished version. nice so far man. props stay up. pc

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beat is decent

vocals too low

u sound like a jr. version of Em's voice...which is blah to me


flow is fine


lyrics?? I can't understand what you're saying...and that's only cool if you're bone-thugs-n-harmony, which you're not


not feelin it...but, distinct style if anything



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Thanks.

Good feedback everyone.
Im definitly goin back and turning the vocals up.
And also....I can't understand what the hell Im sayin either.

Think Im doin the whole thing over. Same lyrics, just re-done.

Your the first person to call me eminem.
But hey.....
It's a compliment in my books.

best thing i ever heard you do. Vocals were aight in my opinion. Maybe just up SLIGHTLY. (unless you fixed it??) I usually hate your flow, and still am not all on this, but its alot better than usual. You dropped alot of the robo effects, and sound alot better. Flow is good, lyrics seem to fall off in the middle (did i hear something about wishing you never left-clicked? LMAO)

anyways - i still hate you, but good looks on improving ya flow.

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you see^

you can hate sum one. and still be honest.
Me an Phendetta hate each other, but we give honest feedback.

Thats the problem with most on this site.
They don't....they jus say "it blows" if they dont like you.

Thanks for the feedback. An I repect that, Even if I do hate you.

-Listening

Beat is sweet...I like it...wouldn't mind being on this track myself....up your vocals alot...hard to hear because of the beat....from what I can tell your delivery and emotion is good....flow is nice as well...honestly I think this is pretty dope from what I can hear from you...quality is just meh and shit...but if you would let me hop on this track I could up the quality..no doubt this beat is what makes the song sweet..and if I could hear you better your verse sounds like it'd be nice...vocabulary in some parts are good as well...would be a nice track when it's done


Rating:
8.5/10

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