bring it, norm rules, 5-15 lines 15mins to write from check in.

ok jay-r picture this, your rappin on stage like a star,
oh shit sorry thats me, you've already gone to far/1
i'm sayin, wickedy wack awesome and cool,
you fucking tool, how could anyone think your not a fool/2
you should be performing tricks while wearing your cox-cone,
saying jokes like your a drone, and i condone/3
your so retarted no one can leave you alone,
eating table scraps from the king, me pine-cone/4
so play it just like that guy chris rock,
he got a raise in pay since he started suckin my cock/5
oh yes it is time, look at the clock,
my line is almost over, its here for you to mock/6
you'll need the help of copying my lines,
all because you dont have the intelligence for your own rhymes/7
i see your battle record is one seven o,
i dont know whick blows worse, it, or your mom the ho/8
that line was for your mom as a promo,
now give out your adress so they know where to go/9
ashes to ashes, dust to dust,
all i've left of this battle is a pile or dust/10

Aight, i'ma do this bitch real quick...

Pine Cone is similar to a wheel chair, he has no mobility until given a push
The factor is this guy's filled with fear, and avoids battles like he's George Bush
I should write my verse in reverse, so ya can see an mc back up his words
He's full of shit like a woman's purse, only in da wildlife is Pine Cone prefered
He mistakenly made his way to R.B., he believed it stood for "Rowdy Boys"
Male member pics makes him happy, gives him added joy when using his toys
Someone ban this bitch from the site, i'm fearing for my personal well being
Afraid he'll mistake my dick for a sprite, 'n try to quench his thirst when i'm peeing
His structure resembles the Twin Towers, it is nothing more than fallen rubble
Becoming that wack must took hours, posting that verse was asking for trouble
On a serious note i'ma end his challenge, before I lower my skill to his level
Withdraw his hopes of winnin like a syringe, couldn't spit hot lines if he bit off the devil

OPenr: J
Closer: J
Man the Sprite line had me bustin out laughin dawg
Flow": J
Personals: J
Punches:PC
WIn: J
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yo jay-r took this fo sho PIne Cone was way too basic.....i was feelin jay-r's creativity too.............Pine Cone you jus' need to elevate

open - Jay
flow - Jay
punches - both
personals - Jay
overall - Jay

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well dammit jay-r hands down mu'fuuca pine cone need to really step up his game, flow, punches, creativity, meter, jay-r

cant poll vote sorry but dam you get my prop vote


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need sum honest votes, da battle 4-1 in my favor

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Punches: J
Flow J
Personals: Tie
Overal J
Vote J

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