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Old 08-28-03, 04:53 PM   #1
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Penpanship...Pure Keystyle

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Potent Wordz...Perfect

This is penmanship

Potent steps up...
Keep learning the same lessons so you can re-tort(taught)
Do you buy his lyrics? Got two pennys and there bought/
Lickin-wit-risks cuz you against potent who spit all-sorts,
Writes ya lyrics at an abandoned harbour so there ex-ported/
Styles aborted out fo this battle…or was it terminated,
Only time you write in the whole is when scripts perforated/
You got exaggerated punches cuz they more like slaps,
Still can’t make-up what your trailing cuz it’s unstrapped/
Lost a caravan in ya raps!! but I’m just playin wit you,
This is just a bit of slap n tickle so here’s wot intrudes/

...Actually puts a bit of effort

Ya punches don’t stand a chance there lying,
Gets multiple chat names so his names IM-plying/
Can I measure wind? Well his lines are long-winded,
Styles sprinted battle me….so quickly its finished/
Only looking at large clevage does his flip the switch,
Talking about his sex when he say ya spit the shit/
Pre-dicked but can’t make assumptions he fucked up,
Stuck in a rut but he still can’t get in the groove much/

...Word Perfectnow kills it

I take my penmanship out of context-
script ripped proplex-
this a closed battle I rip you on open text-
once your eyes close and you dose off I will take what I write-resite it-
im AIDS so ill your body cant fight it-
make you eat your words and chew twice-
cause you DEFINE PENMANSHIP as flavorless APPETITE-
your style PLAIN BITES-
I can say it any way you want-
From old English ,script ,or monotype corsiva font-
Im undaunt-the ghostwriter my written word haunts-
You pussy… I can beat you with my tongue in a battle from taunts-
No need to floss my gold grill flonts-on deligaunts-
y style is something you just can try bout wont avoid-
i got more lines then GUCCI corteroids-
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Old 08-28-03, 04:57 PM   #2
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...Nice.......was really.....ok ....flowed really tite...nice vocab....,fo real..liked readin this piece.....props to u both
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