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Old 02-11-04, 08:52 PM   #1
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Hot New Mini Track

IP: 6737 5A11

"Hot new drop of the week. This track is aimed directly to these 4 people at my school who didn't think It was me rapping on my old tracks. It'll only take 1:34 minutes of your time so peep this and rate it 1-10."

Verse One: Gman
Chorus: Gman


Gman- How you gonna say this isn't my Voice
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Old 02-11-04, 10:36 PM   #2
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this is a nice track.. beat is the common style lately.. u could'a come with a bit more emotion... but it was nice for what it was, why people say'n it not your voice... IE: Trevor... lol... i dno, different concept on this.. but u did it pretty well i guess...

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Old 02-12-04, 12:20 AM   #3
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Your flow is dope follows the beat well........but like blunt-mc said you need to put in more emotions cuz your too monotone........and also you should of maybe worked on your chorus a little, it's not very catchy but I shouldn't talk my chorus aren't better ....anyways nice shit
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