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01-27-06, 03:00 PM
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Unfuckwidable<<<<Unf N Trakk Starr>>>>>THAT HOTTT SHIITTT!!!
IP: 77D7 FEEA
www.soundclick.com/unf Unfuckwidable!!! We Unfuckwidable! Left Feed Dabatos http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220210 Forever You And I Vital http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2634685 So Serious Ft.Fate
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01-27-06, 03:04 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 9452 9A13
shit i was ognna listen but i gtg, be back after the weekend to leave feed....peace...
UNF, hit up that track me u and trakk doin peace
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01-27-06, 03:06 PM
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IP: 77D7 FEEA
Word Man,Ima Holla At It!
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01-27-06, 03:10 PM
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IP: 3053 F660
k comes iin......intro is coo with the echo n stuff...
the hook...is ok...i think if it was mixed better and the quality was a lil better itd be a pretty ill hook....cause it has tons of potential to be very catchy.. 1st dude....flow is ok...but the lyrics arent too great...need to work on that lyricism....voice is coo....delivery needs to be switched up a bit more...its not bad...it would just keep my attention more if u switched it up some throughout the verse... UNF..your quality is weird and it makes it hard to make out what your saying..it seems like your backed away from the mic...may just be the way u mixed or something...lyrics seem ok...delivery is ok...presence could be a lil more "in your face"...but that may just be the mixing where it seems your backed away.... overall this isnt bad guys...a few minor mistakes here and there.....but nothing too drastic....keep working...you both have tons of potential
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01-27-06, 03:11 PM
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IP: 77D7 FEEA
^^^Thanks
 ......My Mic Fucked up,Need To Re-Configure the Settings
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01-27-06, 03:12 PM
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IP: 8630 C252
werd thanx fam u got any favours ya need returned fam
good feed PRECIATE IT
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01-27-06, 03:46 PM
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IP: 77D7 FEEA
upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp
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01-30-06, 07:52 PM
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P.S.A**DYNASTY
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IP: 8630 C252
bump///////////////////////////////////
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02-04-06, 09:48 PM
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*listening*
Not really feeling the echo effect at the beginning. The hook at the beginning should also have an effect added to it so it sounds more like an actual hook. Trakkstar needs to turn his dubs down a little. The first verse wasn't that bad. A few spots that need some polishing flow-wise. Quality was pretty good. Again, hook needs some work. UNF came in ok. He needs some help with his quality pretty badly. You should read my tutorial in the Audio Assistance forum.....I really think it would help your quality a whole hell of a lot. Your flow is pretty good and your voice is nice for a UK rapper......you just need to clear the vocals up so we can hear what you are saying  ™Just constructive feedback, I hope you use it ™RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221281
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