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10-13-03, 08:39 PM | #1 | ||||||
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My Passion
IP: CFFE 3708
writing helps me with alot of problems, helps me sort things, helps me clear my mind...
With every letter comes a drop of blood With every word comes my first love With every thought comes my heart Every sentence brings out pain Every period brings a tear Everything I show here is all that I fear Things people couldn’t understand Things people wouldn’t understand Cause I am a selfness being Never thinking just seeing I’m ripping out my inner lining Reveling what I am and I can be I must stand strong and face reality Stand strong and raise my voice Scream from heaven to hell all that there is And when im done I will stand alone And leave behind this drop of blood And my first love And I lay down my heart Fight off my pain Cry a single tear And laugh at fear Then maybe you will understand give me some feedback |
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10-13-03, 10:04 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 2A87 EF89
This is deep. Good drop. this is one way many people use to get out stuff and help solve there problems. good structure, word flow was good. keep elavating. hit up someof mine if you pleez. spect JT
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