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03-07-03, 07:56 AM | #1 | |||||||
.BeTteR ThAn YoO!.
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"Lost in this World"
IP: 92FE 2714
Lost
So many, many days lost in my ways, searchin and seeking, only to find my mind was leaking, I have lost the values I portrayed as a child, today my heart be known as shit mild, don't care bout self worth no more, don't even care about how many chicks I score, an unkown soul in this world of shit, striving and dreaming to make that king hit, meadskillz sometimes lose the idea, even begin to fear, that the style is out of date, that his old time groupies won't relate, but the kids all know that they stay faithful, not about to be-come hateful, coz skillz once taught them peace is the way to be, live by my laws and you will always be free, eternity beholds me, My rhymes will always survive,I'm startin to revive, this mind of mine,with just one simple line, dont ever lose hope, make rhymes that be dope, music is the answer, one love for us all, don't ever fall, keep on risin, to the cream, reach that dream. I'm startin to look at life through the eyes of my child thought, thinkin, doin, just the way i was taught. Ideas and views change every second, everytime you think, pop culture will beckon, there will always be retaliation, cats be hatin the number 1 sensation, all of these years, Time spent slippin, sniffin up lines, my mind be dippin, I dropped that mess, I can't ever stop to stress, that you gotta use every minute to the full, earn the type of dough, given to Keb Mo. so don't use your mind like i so stupidly did, you gotta adapt these thoughts as a kid, grow up strong, don't get wrong, live with pride, don't ever hide, hold your shit down, step up to get that crown, plan to hone and go take that throne. Never think your the best till you beaten the rest, by the way of the silent warrior, creatin a lyrical euphoria, adapt your mind, its time to shine, put up your name, claim domination of the game, just don't waste your brain, this how cats goin insane. |
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03-07-03, 08:07 AM | #2 | |||||||
.-.Marxism.-.
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IP: B651 A6D5
another ill piece coming outta 2223, still coming true with the messages... keep rhymin
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03-07-03, 08:16 AM | #3 | ||||||
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i think everyone knows, that shit there was dope
this guy will turn massive, and this shit will just be a classic .. only ur early days, but on ur way to reachin the sky.. |
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03-08-03, 06:17 PM | #4 | |||||||
.BeTteR ThAn YoO!.
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IP: F873 BBF5
Yo, doggs, thanx for the feedback, I'm wantin some more advice and criticism from y'all, so read up and tell me what y'all think.
Peace out.
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