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Old 05-07-03, 03:57 AM   #1
philly96
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get this off my chest

IP: 7FEB 4053

These mother fuckers, are always fuckin wit me
open them eyes bitches and see
I aint got no friends
and i'm still a G
wit a heart like the sea
till u piss me off then its a puttle of pee

Now I dont give a what what you fuckers think of me
yall can think i'm jenny craig with HIV
but you'll never be half as good as me
as i grow up, and blow up youl never see the end of me
I like to think of myself like suddahm
a crazy mother fuck who drop this bomb
with mustard gas, tempt me, fuck i'll blass you ass
you cant even keep up with me
i'm just to fast
just like heroshima yall will be a trail of ash

So if I afended anyone with this rhym
then reading it was a waste of time
but slowly it'l eat you up, line by line
but i'm waiting for a tear cause a sign of you cryin

so if you want to know who I am
I'm Philly96
the true hardcore man
cause I can stick to you like pam on a pan
spary me on walk away, and lets see you try and stand

so dont get angry or turn turn into pussy hatters
aalright im out
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Old 05-07-03, 04:39 AM   #2
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lotta hatred....but if das what you feelin.....its all good..... my advice is just play around wit ya words as much as you can....you have the basic idea of it....now all you gotta do is elevate wit vocab, multies, wordplay etc.... always can elevate....pretty hard fo a starter......but i thought you got weaker as it went on....no hatin though...good start....

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