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12-29-03, 03:56 PM | #1 | |||||||
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young bangers anthonm f/echo
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99595
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101970 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...857#post1026857
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12-29-03, 04:21 PM | #2 | |||||||
young mike-young bangers-
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young bangers anothom
verse 1(young mike) you already know whats up// come on my block see if you dont get shot up// young mike you probley heard me from hail mary 2.0// young bangers maken a quick g off 1 show// yeah i know its alot but it keeps me alright// you probley saw me robbin niggas at night// fucking with young bangers you best to be up for a fight// pullin my 9 have ya nigga parilized through ya mouth 2 ya spine// sellin nicks nothin more nothin less// aint feelin my music then ya should protest// but one thing you should have a vest// to protect chest// so far we got echo// you know but we lookin for more to be in our crew// if you haten the ....fuck you chourus(x2) young bangers comin' into the scene wit a blast// fresher than other crews, compare and contrast// always writing about the dead hand of the past// rising from their graves, making it last!// verse 2(echo I was drivn' down the road when a cop pulled me over// who gives a fuck if I like to drive on the shoulder?// traffics backed up by these people who is older// dangle a social security check in front of their car// maybe they will go fast and knock someone over// I ended up going to court 'cause he sighted me// and I invited my lawyer, he got excited by me// I got to go to traffic school and sit for hours// I devoured because "knowledge is power!"// Not! Next time I'll try the fuck not to get caught// my plan will need to be thought out and distraught// If I get a "rich people's" car, maybe I won't get pulled over yo...... ' chourse (x2) young bangers comin' into the scene wit a blast// fresher than other crews, compare and contrast// always writing about the dead hand of the past// rising from their graves, making it last!// verse 3(flowz r mental
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12-29-03, 05:11 PM | #3 | |||||||
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It was aight.............both of ya jumped off topic alot and young mike.....you had no structure, word on betta vocab, work on makin sure you stay on topic, try throwin sum multi's out, use a betta rhyme scheme, dont talk about "robbin niggaz".....i lyke tha way yall took tha time to do a collab though.....keep droppin.....and elevate. No hate..............but i feel like i just read a verse from 3 6 Mafia...........stay real, peace, 1
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