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09-29-04, 10:17 PM | #1 |
Flyweight
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SubtleTee vs x-on
IP: CEDE 005F
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6 -10 No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-29-04 at 11:17 PM Must drop verse in 720 minutes after check in. |
09-29-04, 10:18 PM | #2 | |
Guest
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IP: CEDE 005F
SubtleTee has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 10:18 PM.
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09-29-04, 10:40 PM | #3 | |
Guest
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IP: 1BD5 13B2
x-on has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 10:40 PM.
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09-29-04, 11:00 PM | #4 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 1BD5 13B2
The Chosen one baby, X-on...
Ayo: Ones left thinking and contenplating why you think X-on's got weak punches?/ After this battle you'll understand only good shit you got in your "school lunches"// I'm a try to be a scocialogist on this one, and try to make a hypothesiss/ Cause my senses say i'll kill your style and leave you burried in a sarcafaguiss// You fail to understand i'll leave you out of a job like a "NHL PLAYer"/ Or like Eminem fucking Cage, you cock sucking day raper// ----------------------------------------------- I know i'll need to explain some shit here. - This guy was on my dick for saying how I had week punches in one of my battles when the other people said it was sick -scicologist, they stud individuals, so i'm studying his mind and hypothesis is a educated guess. -sarcaffagus is what momy's were burried in. -Cage had a song called suicid failor, eminem copied his shit. See what you got hommy? VOTES PLEASE!!!!! |
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09-29-04, 11:02 PM | #5 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 1BD5 13B2
I ment to say , " how eminem fucked cage*** that's it..
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09-30-04, 12:08 AM | #6 |
Flyweight
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IP: CEDE 005F
Here's the link to text elevation, come and battle me after you go use it./
Watch me drop X harder and faster than ravers jamming to techno music/ I rhyme too hot. An effortless win, I’ll easily slice through all you brought./ But it’s easy to aim KO punches cuz all pirates know X MARKS THE SPOT/ Battling me is the equivalent of blind Spanish cripples trying to race bulls./ And you’ve only got DMX in belly after taking a round of cumshot facials./ I know elevation can cause frustration, but whack lines just invite hate son/ Now I understand why he listed getting “schooled” as a full-time occupation./ Left helpless like kids with ~broken necks~ my ill lines stay ~smoken vets.~/ And like a Mothers Against Club Drugs meet there won’t be any votes for X./ Explanations: Line 2: X = Ecstasy Line 4: X marks the spot on a treasure map Line 5: The Running of the Bulls in Spain Line 6: His bio says "I'm like DMX in belly" Line 8: His occupation is "School" Line 10: Mothers against drugs, Ecstasy, get it? |
09-30-04, 05:21 PM | #7 |
Flyweight
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IP: CEDE 005F
Um, why do people not vote? Bumping this it's been open for a day.
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Laid To Rest: Wicked One, Vango, Critic, X-on, genocide (biter),40cal,
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09-30-04, 06:38 PM | #8 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 522C 0055
yeah , I know dog. this shit is wack?? hahah vote people!!
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10-01-04, 07:43 AM | #9 |
Flyweight
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IP: CEDE 005F
Okay bumpin this up. Where the fuck are the voters?
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Laid To Rest: Wicked One, Vango, Critic, X-on, genocide (biter),40cal,
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10-02-04, 05:57 PM | #10 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 522C 0055
Votes.. please like let's get this shit done with...
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10-02-04, 06:37 PM | #11 | |
Phlogiston
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IP: EAD7 9D22
Voted For: SubtleTee
Emcee:SubtleTee Verse: Here's the link to text elevation, come and battle me after you go use it./ Watch me drop X harder and faster than ravers jamming to techno music/ I rhyme too hot. An effortless win, I’ll easily slice through all you brought./ But it’s easy to aim KO punches cuz all pirates know X MARKS THE SPOT/ Battling me is the equivalent of blind Spanish cripples trying to race bulls./ And you’ve only got DMX in belly after taking a round of cumshot facials./ I know elevation can cause frustration, but whack lines just invite hate son/ Now I understand why he listed getting “schooled” as a full-time occupation./ Left helpless like kids with ~broken necks~ my ill lines stay ~smoken vets.~/ And like a Mothers Against Club Drugs meet there won’t be any votes for X./ Comments:i think you took this because of harder hitting punches and more metas...g'job Marks: Wordplay:5/10 Vocabulary:6/10 Structure:7/10 Punches:7/10 Personals:8/10 Opener:7/10 Closer:6/10 Metaphors:6/10 Creativity:5/10 Enjoyment:6/10 Overall:63/100 ----------63% Emcee:x-on Verse: Ayo: Ones left thinking and contenplating why you think X-on's got weak punches?/ After this battle you'll understand only good shit you got in your "school lunches"// I'm a try to be a scocialogist on this one, and try to make a hypothesiss/ Cause my senses say i'll kill your style and leave you burried in a sarcafaguiss// You fail to understand i'll leave you out of a job like a "NHL PLAYer"/ Or like Eminem fucking Cage, you cock sucking day raper// Comments:well most of the time you shouldnt have to explain punches and personals....the only ones you might have to explain are ones that you leave links to or whatever may be ur reasons...you dont listen to a song and dont understand it...then at the end they give and explanation to evryword they said... Marks: Wordplay:4/10 Vocabulary:5/10 Structure:6/10 Punches:5/10 Personals:4/10 Opener:5/10 Closer:5/10 Metaphors:4/10 Creativity:5/10 Enjoyment:2/10 Overall:44/100 ----------44% |
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10-02-04, 06:38 PM | #12 | |
Phlogiston
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IP: EAD7 9D22
return the favor.....................................
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10-03-04, 09:16 PM | #13 | |
huh~!
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: SubtleTee
Here's the link to text elevation, come and battle me after you go use it./ Watch me drop X harder and faster than ravers jamming to techno music/ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ha good opener lol nice punch rhyme too hot. An effortless win, I’ll easily slice through all you brought./ But it’s easy to aim KO punches cuz all pirates know X MARKS THE SPOT/ ^^^^^^^^^^^ nice mayne good punch Battling me is the equivalent of blind Spanish cripples trying to race bulls./ And you’ve only got DMX in belly after taking a round of cumshot facials./ I know elevation can cause frustration, but whack lines just invite hate son/ Now I understand why he listed getting “schooled” as a full-time occupation./ Left helpless like kids with ~broken necks~ my ill lines stay ~smoken vets.~/ And like a Mothers Against Club Drugs meet there won’t be any votes for X./ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ aight cool nice verse mayne u had-punches and personals Ones left thinking and contenplating why you think X-on's got weak punches?/ After this battle you'll understand only good shit you got in your "school lunches"// I'm a try to be a scocialogist on this one, and try to make a hypothesiss/ Cause my senses say i'll kill your style and leave you burried in a sarcafaguiss// You fail to understand i'll leave you out of a job like a "NHL PLAYer"/ Or like Eminem fucking Cage, you cock sucking day raper// ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ aight nice verse dis an good piece but yo punches wasnt hittin harder good flow work on dem punches u'll get betta v-sub for harder punches
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10-04-04, 09:51 PM | #14 |
Flyweight
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IP: CEDE 005F
Elevating this shit for votes. It's been a week...
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Battles:
Laid To Rest: Wicked One, Vango, Critic, X-on, genocide (biter),40cal,
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10-05-04, 03:58 PM | #15 |
Flyweight
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IP: CEDE 005F
........................Skyin for votes..........................
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Laid To Rest: Wicked One, Vango, Critic, X-on, genocide (biter),40cal,
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