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ok
Beat i like the beat, the church bells, an the kinda violin strings. A ill beat which could, of been ripped on. Chorus/hook the bit wer ur kinda mumbling, i like the effect, an over the beat it sound very nice, a great effect. you jus need to make it a il more clear, so you can hear what ur saying. lyrics lyrics are nice, not great not too shabby. delivery i dont like this, this is the downfall of the track. you need to make ur voice clear on a track so that people can actually hear what you are saying. voice if it was you singin the hook then, it was a great hook. But your voice dosent sound quite right on this beat.. overall a nice track wit sum good ideas, with a little more work that could push it up to a better track. i'ma give it 7/10 |
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appreciated feedback.
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Got More Meds Than Pfizer
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it sounds like you mumbling/sluring your words... i cant hear your words either... your flow seems good, like it's on beat.. but you need to up the volume of the vocals... i can't even hear your voice on the hook... damn... man, u need some serious work on quality.. i know your lyrics are good 'cause i've read your texts but ya... hit me on aim, i'll give you some quality tips.. 1
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IP: F8EC 8A4B
no probs.
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nice lyrics, beat was aight, voice was not on the beat, but i liked it
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cool thanx but it was on beat dawg.
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^ Uppin.
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