Round Tha Block (R.I.P. Sonny)

A song i made for my boy that died. I was too distracted and fell off beat a few times. But Ima re-record it to make it better. But peep it and tell me whachu think. Peace.

sound quality is a little off

nice beat

good topic

nice lyrics

nice drop

aiight
peace

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Thanx for tha feedback Double 0. Uppin fo mo feedback peeps.

ok. beginning the intro needs a little more emotion... its kinda long. lyrics are coo. you not rappin loud enough. i use to have that problem.. trust me you gotta scream your rap to get the emotion you want. you need to eq those vocals. raise frequencies at about 7k 5k and10k. you sound to muffled. your lyrics is coo. you just gotta work on ya flow.
coo drop homie.
RIP to ya boy... i just lost one of my homies 2 weeks ago. i know its hard. ~stay up

Aight. Thats why Im re-recordin it cause it sounded kinda bad and everything. But its cool. Feed me ppl....

Lyrics are ok...beat is ok...need to feel the beat more....you sound like you just wrote that and recorded it the same day...so you dont get to feel it much....but its a safe track...R.I.P to your dog fam... check out my track

Thanks man. I appreciate everyone's feedback in here y'all. very much. Uppin.

Yo this some Deep shit Deadly i was feelin it.............especially tha end that was ILL keep it up.......R.I.P. Sonny........... DOA RECORDS