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J~FOUR 5 100.00%
dollarzandsense 0 0%
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Old 12-23-04, 02:08 AM   #1
dollarzandsense
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dollarzandsense vs J~FOUR

IP: 5ECF 15C9

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Old 12-23-04, 02:09 AM   #2
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Old 12-23-04, 02:21 AM   #3
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Four must be the number of brain cells in your head,
youre scared as an 5 year old in michael jacksons bed,
im cold cuz im from canada and you should know i mean this,
but dont jock me cuz i dont want your lips froze to my penis,
you aint got no dollars or sense cuz youre a joke,
plus j-four sounds like somethin baseheads smoke,
time to send you on a long ride down a short rope,
and clean your stupid ass off this site like soap
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Old 12-23-04, 05:06 PM   #4
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Old 12-23-04, 05:19 PM   #5
J~FOUR
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From: 5-1-8
IP: C458 B454

Listen..

Watch As I Put An "L To DS" Like "High Speed Access"{dsl}
And Leave This "Chick Sleepin" Like ~Foul Game On A Mattress~
Nigga Dont Half-Step, You Need To Come Full At-Four
Dude Said He Couldnt "Handle Himself," So I Hit Him With ~The Car Door~
You A Wack Duke, And I Aint Talking Bout ~Mediocre College~
Cause J Hit More "Books To Ya Head" Than ~Researching For Knowledge~
Four's Style Stay "Polished" Like "Shoe Shines In Airports"
Cause Dude Likes His "Men Tall"(Menthol) Like Smokin Wit ~New Ports~
This A Crude Sport, But Like "Suffocated Boxers" Your Getting ~Shown The Ropes~
Cause Im "Percise With My Points" Like ~Putting Holes Through Earlobes~

But The Fact Remains, I Slain Ya Name ANd Chance At Fame
Cause J Knock The "Sense Outta Dollarz" Like ~Making Change~


YeA GoOd LuCk WiTh ThIs DuKe !!!
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Old 12-23-04, 08:41 PM   #6
J~FOUR
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up For Votes............................................. .................................................. ..
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Old 12-23-04, 09:19 PM   #7
J~FOUR
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Old 12-23-04, 11:44 PM   #8
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This was feedback posted for J~FOUR

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Four must be the number of brain cells in your head,
youre scared as an 5 year old in michael jacksons bed,
im cold cuz im from canada and you should know i mean this,
but dont jock me cuz i dont want your lips froze to my penis,
you aint got no dollars or sense cuz youre a joke,
plus j-four sounds like somethin baseheads smoke,
time to send you on a long ride down a short rope,
and clean your stupid ass off this site like soap
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE FLOW, BUT ELEVATE ON PUNCHES THE PUNCHES WERE KINDA WACK AND TOO BASIC PLAYED OUT........


Watch As I Put An "L To DS" Like "High Speed Access"{dsl}
And Leave This "Chick Sleepin" Like ~Foul Game On A Mattress~
Nigga Dont Half-Step, You Need To Come Full At-Four
Dude Said He Couldnt "Handle Himself," So I Hit Him With ~The Car Door~
You A Wack Duke, And I Aint Talking Bout ~Mediocre College~
Cause J Hit More "Books To Ya Head" Than ~Researching For Knowledge~
Four's Style Stay "Polished" Like "Shoe Shines In Airports"
Cause Dude Likes His "Men Tall"(Menthol) Like Smokin Wit ~New Ports~
This A Crude Sport, But Like "Suffocated Boxers" Your Getting ~Shown The Ropes~
Cause Im "Percise With My Points" Like ~Putting Holes Through Earlobes~

But The Fact Remains, I Slain Ya Name ANd Chance At Fame
Cause J Knock The "Sense Outta Dollarz" Like ~Making Change~
^^^^^^^^^^ NICE SHIT FAM GOOD WORDPLAYS. DOPE PUNCHES, GOOD FLOW DONT STRETCH CHA LINES THAT MUCH EITHER, BUT EITHER WAY YOU DID AN GOOD JOB


HANDS DOWN TO J-FOUR DOPE PUNCHES NUFF SAID
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Old 12-23-04, 11:50 PM   #9
J~FOUR
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Good Looking My Nigga............................................. .....................................
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Old 12-24-04, 12:18 PM   #10
J~FOUR
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From: 5-1-8
IP: C458 B454

Rise ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Old 12-24-04, 10:38 PM   #11
J~FOUR
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From: 5-1-8
IP: C458 B454

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Old 12-25-04, 04:43 AM   #12
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fair nuff

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arite props to j~four good battle no doubt. basically im up for any challenges no matter how serious. get at me.
 
Old 12-25-04, 05:02 AM   #13
MaRVJay
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Voted For: J~FOUR

u took dis fam......some of ya shit i was gettin no im not stupid or nothin but i guess u got ya own kind of style...ya first line was ill but da second fukked it up....dollars umm i aint gon tell u da elevate i mean u saw ya verse u know u didn't win not tryn da be mean or nothin fam

opener-four...first line was dope like i said
structure-a tie
punchlines-four...otha dude aint have nun
wordplay-nun
multies-four he had like 1
personals-four
finisher-four nice personal
enjoyed-four ofcourse.....

return da favor links r in my sig
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Old 12-25-04, 12:42 PM   #14
dollarzandsense
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wtf you dissing my verse i peeped your battles kid you're nothing above my level. wtf does it take to get a motherfucka to battle you on this shit?
 
Old 12-25-04, 02:32 PM   #15
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IP: 258C A279

Voted For: J~FOUR

J~FOUR: 5/10
Decent Drop From You..Nuttin Much Here Tho Yo Punches Seemed Kinda Forced Here, Lacked A Little Tho, Decent Structure But Overall Decent Drop, Just Elevate More Tho

Dollar: 3/10
Work On Your Punches, Cause Yous Hardly Made Any Sense, Fix Your Structure Too Stretched It A Little & Decent Flow...But Elevate More Too
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