u know the rules dawg

You spit first

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jay dogg i'm giving it to ya rough, like sand paper in shreds
you a sweat hog man, stay in your pen and get off this thread
aint no revolution needed round here, we got this thing on lock
u think scotland got beef, but you just tending to yo livestock
i agree with aaliyah, dust yourself off cause we need a resolution
once you drop that foreign dictionary you'll come to a conclusion
you shoulda never stepped to this without a step ladder
cause i'm flowin so fluid that your spewing from your bladder
internally destructive, physically corruptive, potentially fatal
as i mold my verse i'll knead on your brain like some play dough
i can break you in all realms, i can take you on any level
i can cause your demise and thats how i'm like the devil
i'll tell it like a dentist, "it's over before you know it"
pick yourself off the ground, grab your pride, and show it











lol

damn no kinda flow to it, but i'm not tripping lol

well dawg seen as u never said i wasnt alout to diss ur shit here goes


potentiallyfatal a sweat hog what the fuck you on dawg
thats some dumb ass shit sounds like it came from a first class tit
it looks like the devil has got your number ill send you into a deep slumber
pick up my claymore make you scream like a whore make the pain sorer than sore
incase you didnt know we dont speak foreign good line but your shits still borin
had me snorin frome the start ill show you a work of art
the revolution has begun i do this shit for fun got dumb ass fags on the run
welcome to the dogpound where you can hear the sound of a lyrical mc
just so you know no one is better than me pull out ma shitstick and take out your knee
i aint even started and already its over next time have a four leave clover

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lol!!! nice drop man, sorta doesn't rhyme too well but it's chill. thanks for the battle.


uppin for votes!

Nice shit Homies i whould vote but im not alooud to i'll vote when i get 25 Posts iight 1

u guyz did good umm.. Jay dogg u need Work on ur Structure and u need it to rhyme more

Potetinly Fatal u got allright Structure u need to work on dat as well ur rhyems are good


good battle guys like ya Style well peace out 1

uppin for votes

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i was feelin fatals verse it was nice.....had some good punches wordplay rhyme scheme flow structure good piece beggining to end as for jay u had an aiight verse but your structure i aint feelin...how you write your verse doesnt sound good u had some good punches tho didnt flow to well not an easy read....

my vote: fatal

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Flow Intellegent basically summed it up.
And also he had a bigger vocab which also helps a lil.

Vote: PF

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uppin for vots to get this shit finished

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fatal u had some gud flow makin it easy for me to get into ure spit
ure structure was good to but cud use a little work. u used gud vocabs and had a good rhyme scheme goin, u had som gud punches and i felt ure shit from start to end
jay ure gud for a newb but ure structure was wack, no offense. ure flow wasn't that gud and ure punches were aight but they didnt really connect.
from what i've seen on this site u need to elevate a lot, both of u, start usin multis and personals alot cuz that shit get u a lot of victories.
Vote - Fatal

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hey jaydogg homie we going to 5 in this one?

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