guyver4mk check in first...spit first if ur feeling confident othawise i'll go first

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Checkin in.
Not one for confidence, not one for patience either.
So I'll so spit first.

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I take this rhyme one stage at a time/
Spit lyrics like grime that fuck with ya mind/
Take one look at you an take out my 9/
Blast holes in ya shirt have ya land on the dirt/
Lyrically you'sa flirt, go to cook-outs in skirts/
Givin rim-jobs that hurt, to ya cousin kurt/
I spit lyrics to prophecise the end of ya days/
Make way for the slayer in you practical gay/
To beat you ain't no competition at all/
You like a midget playin basketball, it won't work at all/
I spit to enthrall the over confident nigga with a piece/
Can't fight with his mind so he always got beef/
Nigga ya shit is see-through, like all'a ya teeth/
When I kick 'em out wiv my studs an fill ya with grief/
Break ya legs an then ya arms, an leave ya on a beach thats calm/
Wait for high tide ta see ya body ride out to sea/
And slowly drown ya, in my preverbial dream/

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in ur second line u say u i spit lyrics like grime
u a retard mk that doesn't even work
den u later u spit crap about a my a cousin called kurt
please tell me ur joking...that can't be a lyrical assault
u called me a midget playing b-ball...you call that an insult
it's confusing/ this wigga be using/ random words, and still think i'm losing
u need to rethink your "punches" u be using
cause your lyrics are crap and have no effect
but then again what can you expect
from a man who took advice from micheal jackson
after a heated round of gang bang action
cause this pathetic shit was ment to b freestyle
came from a man who was abused as a child
using a signature This ain't a game it's a way of life
well let me end your game while u meet my knife
and do rapbattles a favour...please ur mum's impregnater-s
none of them wanted u, u were a mistake
and no one thought that the condom would brake

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Listen...i'll be flippin' the whole world system
Givin' it up and becommin' a christian - More L

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Givin' it up and becommin' a christian - More L

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aiiit!

Im voting "More L" for better punches, better lines, better rymes etc. It was just all over alot better, I'm not creeping or no shit, but "guyver4mk" was ok... (np rhyme intended) but his punches just didnt take as much effect, wheras MoreL's were alot funnier and I dunno, despite the fact MoreL had the advantage I think he would have won anyways, it seems he just has a better way with words...

Good Spitting!

He Fed half his verse off mine. If u call that a fair victory then everyone please vote for him. At least mine was my own.

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I go with guyver on this one. More L's has no rhyme or flow at all and even though the second half is pretty good the first half just fucks it up, imo. Some good punches in there, but mostly weak stuff. guy's stuff has kinda a poetic flow, which is good and equally good punches, so I give it to guy for the superior flow/rhymes and for having to go first and not feed all his lines.

Oh yeah.. vote on mine:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118472

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more l was better