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07-25-02, 03:34 PM | #1 | ||||||
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murder: victims perspectrive
IP: CCAE A7E8
…It was a bitter night, a young girl approaches her death…
…she knows what awaits, but is the threat from the right or the left?... …she can almost feel his breath… …her heart was in her mouth… …her mind not functioning, too full of doubt… …soon she would find out… …a witness, if there was one, could cut the tension with a knife… …what was the victims relationship, was she his wife?… …would tonight be the night she might lose her life?… …Every now and then, a feeling drifts around… …she feel like someone watchin her, then she hear a sound... …the icy cold wind howls all around … …silence makes way for violence as her killer leaps from the bushes… …panic takes over when she screams as he rushes… …the struggle is brief, the killer stabs in the dark… …needless to say, when blood bleeds, pain gushes. |
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08-04-02, 02:25 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: FC26 E24F
Damnz, this whole piece was like a guessin game ...
very descriptive maybe too descriptive kinda made me scared ( i hate bein alone ) ** Phone Rings ahhhhh ** damnz see what u did ... haha Anyways , Quiet an imaginaitve piece ... good flow, Props/ |
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