Alright, you said only 5 lines,.. no feeding off of my spit,..rebuttle fast.


Alright it's the revenge of the nerd, here to show I'm sure as hell not "scurd'\\
bm316 thinks he can battle me that's a shame, too bad being guy's only [B]sixteen{/B]" and he still plays video games\\
Anything he throws at me will be childish and I'll make sure to SETTLE IT\\
I'm King Koopa and you're Mario, grab a star and make a wish, I'll just take your kingdom and LEVEL IT\\
Eat all the 'shrooms, and get those fire flowers, you'll still never be a match to my lyrical powers\\

*cleans his glasses*

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How long does it take to reply? Don't no show on me

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yo while ur waitin for this kat 2 reply can u vote on this with an honesty vote..explain ur votes also

QUICKPUNCH VS INSIDIOUS

If you no show i'll find out where you live and kick your dog

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Slaugtering bitches like you thats what us 6 niggas do//
Ya dick ride so much your sticking to my nutz like elmers glue//(his name)

I'll school this cat,,, like he's still in the 1st grade//
Sucking dicks ya job but you bitch about being underpaid//

Your the community bitch so hoe bow down on ya knees//
Bm316 in this bitch and i'm about to make a scene//

So let me get one thing straight ya tallent is dull//
You can't see me nigga but i see straight through ya skull//

Call me the mc from hell cause all spit is flames//
Ya need keystyline from dummys cause all ya shit is lame//

MCelmersglue' Evelate Kiid' ... That Goes For You Also!!!' .. The Other 'Cat' lol!!

.. Anwyays Bm316 Got This Shit No Doubt He Had Better EveryThing' ...!!!


Checckity Checck It:



Slaugtering bitches like you thats what us 6 niggas do//
Ya dick ride so much your sticking to my nutz like elmers glue//(his name)

^Ok Opener' .. But Weak 6/10

Call me the mc from hell cause all spit is flames//
Ya need keystyline from dummys cause all ya shit is lame//

^A Bit Of A Weak Closer!! 6/10

But Better Then' ... Any Of MC's Lines' !!... Aight!!


Respect!! - - -


Hit Up My Battles!!

High Stakes (VanGo Vs. DisasterPeice420)
&
Phat Mic Vs. DisasterPeice420

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Is my "shit" weak just because I don't lower myself to bad grammar and countless curse words? That's more weak than anything I've ever heard.

Also, the kind 5 single lines, and maybe I'm no good at math but I count double that.

But whatever *brushes shoulders off*

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your a dumbass i said five bars its 2 lines per bar so go figure

It doesn't matter, I' m a "n00b" and I can still say more in 5 single lines that you could in a whole paragraph.

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ya'll need to wake up and vote on this ish right here uppin for votes

uppin on this battle right here i know ya'll people out there vote on this

lol.........im not a hater ima giva a honest vote yo

opener-bm...even tho dat shit was week
structure-bm
punchlines-nun
wordplay-nun
personals-bm
enjoyed-bm...nun of u niggaz had punches and datz whut a battle is about...see bm dogg u talk alot but u can barely battle rap dunn aneway..and da other dude step ya shit up

my vote-bm

RETURN DA FAVOR...DA LINKS IS MY SIG

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

Haha, wow Starvin' Marvin', if you can't even type straight you have no business even voting on this thread.

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uppin in here lets get some more votes going on !!