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Old 11-10-04, 07:47 AM   #1
Chew187
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no uppers?!?

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No uppers, no food in the cupboards
I go to dip in but i'm fresh out of rubbers
chances are that this bitch is your mother
she's just another bitch to fuck and chuck
i ram it so deeply she gags and blows chunks
i'm thru with this ho, her ass smells like skunk
dude there's piss in that coffee you've just been punked
i'm fucked in tha head i'll admit to that
but all you fake posers arent fit to rap
I cant pretend for one minute im sorry
you'll definitely stick me in the same category
nobody has time to pay attention to my story
you laugh because i appeared on Maury Pauvich
til this day i still have respect for no bitch
I dangle bling from my cock like like ornaments
I run my mouth but i will never run for parliament
i'll spit in your mouth bitch your a circus act
theres not being alive that can hurt this man
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Old 11-10-04, 09:44 AM   #2
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This is heavy! I like it

"dude there's piss in that coffee you've just been punked"

-This is the shit! yeah i like it bro. Keep up the good work!
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Old 11-10-04, 10:20 AM   #3
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pretty garbage drop...i didnt understand your whole concept...you were changing from one idea to another to another...u had no multis wordplay or any vocab

stay up man
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Old 11-10-04, 01:12 PM   #4
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nobody has time to pay attention to my story
you laugh because i appeared on Maury Pauvich


What story?? Is this a story a rhyme about your fucking your mom? Heard this shitt over and over get some new ideas.........

Vocabulary was low, Wordplay was average, multis if there was some......
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