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07-25-06, 06:26 PM | #1 | ||||
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whip it real hard, whip it whip it real hard...haahah jay n enygma
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we were just messing around, i had to use my bad headphones quality is a lil slack....otherwise enjoy
1st verse - jay 2nd verse - enygma whip it - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4232327 Links - http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2803689 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2803694
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dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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07-25-06, 06:44 PM | #2 | |||||||
The Light
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beat is hot. not my style, but its hot..
chorus is hot haha. nice sample.. jay - lol first 1/4 of your verse was in my opinion was pretty ill. after that flow started to fade off, lyrics were good i thought. flow wise, it just kinda fell off a lil bit.. enygma - ha. flow nice. lyrics are nice. nothin wrong with it. real solid verse. overall a nice listen. solid drop
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07-25-06, 07:13 PM | #3 | |||||||
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well...borrowing the hook from Rick Ross's song...ehh...iz aiigh
beat lacks production...but is okay Jay...flow and rhyming are good Eny...vocals need better mixing...they sound over-compressed flow/lyrics not bad who were you "dissing" m hmm solid drop 1 |
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07-25-06, 08:23 PM | #4 | ||||
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The beat is good saidly to say I already used this beat on my album and the song gone be on Chicago radio stations shortly but you all flowed quit well too it rhyme scemme wasn't always all that but it was nice 7/10
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07-25-06, 09:22 PM | #5 | |||||
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lol.....I actually wan't "dissing" anyone in particular. I can see why you'd think that though.....lol. Anyway, for some reason I had the verse sounding perfect, but then when I mixed it down it sounded completely muddy, so I fucked with the vocals some more and ended up just killing it with highs.... =/
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07-25-06, 09:29 PM | #6 | ||||
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a yo rtf on one of my tracks
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07-26-06, 10:26 PM | #7 | ||||
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uppin muh fuckaaaaaaaaaas
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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07-26-06, 11:44 PM | #8 | ||||||||
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Good stuff.
I like Jay's verse a little more. But both flowed sick. Good work. 9/10
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07-27-06, 02:02 PM | #9 | ||||
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whipping this track to the top of the board
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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