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Old 07-25-06, 06:26 PM   #1
Jay Rose
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Talking whip it real hard, whip it whip it real hard...haahah jay n enygma

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we were just messing around, i had to use my bad headphones quality is a lil slack....otherwise enjoy

1st verse - jay
2nd verse - enygma


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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 07-25-06, 06:44 PM   #2
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beat is hot. not my style, but its hot..

chorus is hot haha. nice sample..

jay - lol first 1/4 of your verse was in my opinion was pretty ill. after that flow started to fade off, lyrics were good i thought. flow wise, it just kinda fell off a lil bit..


enygma - ha. flow nice. lyrics are nice. nothin wrong with it. real solid verse.

overall a nice listen. solid drop
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Old 07-25-06, 07:13 PM   #3
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well...borrowing the hook from Rick Ross's song...ehh...iz aiigh

beat lacks production...but is okay

Jay...flow and rhyming are good


Eny...vocals need better mixing...they sound over-compressed

flow/lyrics not bad

who were you "dissing"


m hmm


solid drop

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Old 07-25-06, 08:23 PM   #4
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The beat is good saidly to say I already used this beat on my album and the song gone be on Chicago radio stations shortly but you all flowed quit well too it rhyme scemme wasn't always all that but it was nice 7/10
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Old 07-25-06, 09:22 PM   #5
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well...borrowing the hook from Rick Ross's song...ehh...iz aiigh

beat lacks production...but is okay

Jay...flow and rhyming are good


Eny...vocals need better mixing...they sound over-compressed

flow/lyrics not bad

who were you "dissing"


m hmm


solid drop

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lol.....I actually wan't "dissing" anyone in particular. I can see why you'd think that though.....lol. Anyway, for some reason I had the verse sounding perfect, but then when I mixed it down it sounded completely muddy, so I fucked with the vocals some more and ended up just killing it with highs....

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Old 07-25-06, 09:29 PM   #6
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a yo rtf on one of my tracks
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Old 07-26-06, 10:26 PM   #7
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uppin muh fuckaaaaaaaaaas
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 07-26-06, 11:44 PM   #8
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Good stuff.

I like Jay's verse a little more. But both flowed sick. Good work.

9/10
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Old 07-27-06, 02:02 PM   #9
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whipping this track to the top of the board
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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