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Old 12-10-06, 11:53 AM   #1
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25. K Illa (0-1) vs 26. Shiest Lucia (0-0)

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Old 12-11-06, 08:43 AM   #2
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What type of black man..wanna be Taliban?..I cant comprehend
why not strap a bomb to ya chest..a blow ya ass back to Pakistan
You wanna meet Allah?..cool geek..i bury you so deep you can see Jim Hoffa
you weak B..Terrorist please..he the sheep..and me?..Im Mustafa
This nigga swearin he PLO..but he so hoe..he at home playin wit tickle me Elmo
this dude dumber than Kelso..burinin flags like he the Arabian Mob
well if this bitch Hezbolah then Im merkin this jerk like the Massod
Givin this bitch the rod..you wanna die so bad..I'll introduce you to God
all ya warrior talk is fake it's all a fassad..I'll bomb dude like a JiHad
so he can meet is 75 virgins who all fat bitches that look Lik Dick Dirbin
this Jerk couldn't match the my magic if his middle name was Merlin
you a Nerd friend why you wanna be A-rab? when he weeker than Dekaf
why don't you just kill your self and take a TNT bath wit ya geek ass
Nigga see you on the Ave we don't see terrorist we See-fag swallow a meat-bag
Duech-bag If you wanna be Habib so bad go get a job drivin a street-cab
Or pump Gas cuz these wanna be middle-east thaughts are crazy you Fugazi
If you the Palistinians well then bitch Im the Israili killin ya babies
fuckin Gacey only Dukes this dude ever put up is some Daisey's
if you the Muslem Im the Jew keepin you out of the Gaza Strip and Jeruselem
Im them soidiers Tanks, Helicopters and patriot missels abusin-them
Im Jesus beatin the shit out Mohammad for being a false flaggin Prophet
I'll have this fag family dressed in that all Black like them Gothics
If you the insergent then bitch Im that Air Force Pilot in the Cock-Pit
wit a bomb bout to drop-it Im the Microwave you the Hot-pocket
You can't stop this hot shit tell you what to do Ock.."Quit"..an get ya lips
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Old 12-12-06, 10:24 AM   #3
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Old 12-13-06, 10:25 AM   #4
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What the fuck was that? ...Where were the personals
Unless I was Muslim, Jew or Greek...Then that wud be Personal
Your style is elementary...at best you could grind kids
How the fuck ya gonna diss me...
..By ripping on the images in my sign pic?
Keep actin' hard on RV...Cuz your bigged in the status
Which ya Gurl saw I was...
..Thats why your flop-dick was the pratice.
It's quite known your a hoe...so keep out the daylight
Strap you with stilletoes'n'have you working strips latenight
For Shiest hunts and whores, Call him the Taliban Predator
I'm Taking this author out quicker...Then underpaid Editors.
Jabs and stabs leave puss-holes killed...Know the deal Illa
You could have done aswell...
..But your name shows your one-space from a Real Killa
Look here, Dude I'll never lose to you...so don't try to Play God
Since you lost your battle...To the Drunken Wordz of an AhGod
With quick deliveries that embrace...Sword movements Wielding
And a roundhouse to your face...Truer than Namekian Buildings
You droppin' pre-ejaculated verses...I'm still knocking you off
To bad that style doesn't work..
...Whenever Illa's break his chicks off
If lyrics were hammers...you'd be back in a stretcher
So I'll sensitively write to this homo, obsessing Nick Fletcher...
So you wanna fuck with me?...Dawg I'll Fuck you out
Wit Combos that'll Hook fishes...and Knock Your Trout
Look K, actin' big-headed...so I'll heckle your pride
I'll switch this fag n' alter-egos...
..So don't look surprised when all your Jeckel's are Hydes.
This bi-fag runs more fuckin pipe...then ulitity systems
Bomb you wit tight crosses...
...I'll have Muslims beggin' for Christening...
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Old 12-13-06, 12:00 PM   #5
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Jabs and stabs leave puss-holes killed...Know the deal Illa
You could have done aswell...
..But your name shows your one-space from Real Killas
Look here, Dude I'll never lose to you...so don't try to Play God
Since you lost your battle...To the Drunken Wordz of an AhGod
If lyrics were hammers...you'd be back in a stretcher
So I'll sensitively write to this homo, obsessing Nick Fletcher...

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Damn K, you suck. That was just garbage and I am being generous with quoting bars this week and still, I couldn't see anything from you that was even remotely decent. Shiest, you had a lot of played shit and some concepts that were pretty decent but you need to work on wording them better. You had a few decent bars though, when based on the actual quality shown in this battle.

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Old 12-13-06, 12:11 PM   #6
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Old 12-13-06, 12:18 PM   #7
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Damn K, you suck. That was just garbage and I am being generous with quoting bars this week and still, I couldn't see anything from you that was even remotely decent. Shiest, you had a lot of played shit and some concepts that were pretty decent but you need to work on wording them better. You had a few decent bars though, when based on the actual quality shown in this battle.

V/ - Shiest Lucia


thats a straight up hate vote dude don't even vote on my battles dog
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Old 12-13-06, 11:09 PM   #8
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K Illa

Aye Man I dont know if you had permission to edit your verse....But....anyway on the basis of the edited verse that was left it was aii nothing specail nothinreally stood out yo ddint hav any good concepts they were mostly played out stuff jus flipped and reworded a little better but still I dont think that that whole lot of somethin came up to nothing but it came up to a little somethin But work on that

Shiest

Man Your verse wasnt anythin more than specail neither but overall you had a nice begining and thats whats really needed to have someone read the rest of your verse lol ...l...But overall you had some nice originality in the begining but still nothing special

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Old 12-14-06, 12:25 PM   #9
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they were mostly played out stuff jus flipped and reworded a little better but still I dont think that that whole lot of somethin came up to nothing but it came up to a little somethin But work on that


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Old 12-14-06, 12:31 PM   #10
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thats a straight up hate vote dude don't even vote on my battles dog


I don't hate vote, if I don't like somebody that bad I wouldn't vote in their battles at all. Why waste the time. I won't deny though that I think you are a tool.
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Old 12-14-06, 02:46 PM   #11
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"Tool" lol that is so lame and gay your obvious lameness is comicle I bet you look just like Wierd Al. "white and nerdy" word and herb all slang no one uses anymore. Tool is such a gay insult it's more insulting to you than it is to me. Youd get clowned in an American hip hop club. you some Sub burbanite white kid wit no life and is still a virgin. maybe u get off RV and attempt at getting some pussy.
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"Tool" lol that is so lame and gay your obvious lameness is comicle I bet you look just like Wierd Al. "white and nerdy" word and herb all slang no one uses anymore. Tool is such a gay insult it's more insulting to you than it is to me. Youd get clowned in an American hip hop club. you some Sub burbanite white kid wit no life and is still a virgin. maybe u get off RV and attempt at getting some pussy.


And that's why White ppl hate black ppl. Y'all need to chill on the racism.

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Old 12-14-06, 02:54 PM   #13
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shut up uncle tom your an ucle tom dick riding a white boy that wont admit black people started american rap and hip and jazz and blues and rock n roll and R&B. your the biggest Tom on earth.

"that's why white people hate black people" your a 100% hoe you fuckin uncle tom ass bitch. you aint no New Yorker your too bitch made to make in the Rotten Apple
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Old 12-15-06, 02:42 AM   #15
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Nigga see you on the Ave we don't see terrorist we See-fag swallow a meat-bag
Duech-bag If you wanna be Habib so bad go get a job drivin a street-cab
^I CHUCKLED AT THAT FOR SOME REASON
If you the insergent then bitch Im that Air Force Pilot in the Cock-Pit
wit a bomb bout to drop-it Im the Microwave you the Hot-pocket
^OK METAPHOR COMPARISON


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For Shiest hunts and whores, Call him the Taliban Predator
I'm Taking this author out quicker...Then underpaid Editors.
^THAT WAS OK, NOT GREAT BUT I LIKED A LIL
Jabs and stabs leave puss-holes killed...Know the deal Illa
You could have done aswell...
..But your name shows your one-space from a Real Killa
^GOOD SHOT
Look here, Dude I'll never lose to you...so don't try to Play God
Since you lost your battle...To the Drunken Wordz of an AhGod
^DECENT
If lyrics were hammers...you'd be back in a stretcher
So I'll sensitively write to this homo, obsessing Nick Fletcher...
^LOW BLOW


v/ Shiest

your main proble K illa was you keep sayin the same thing, seem like you only focused on his ethnisity and it got repetative, WE GET IT AFTER LIKE 10 LINES! Both guys could elevate tho, I'm never reading a whole battle that long again unless it's a champ match. Findin good lines was an ordeal to say the least. 10-16 lines next time fellas.
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