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10-02-04, 01:58 AM | #1 | |||||||
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Why do i wake-up?
IP: 3CB0 FA3B
my eyes open and light shines through
look outside and see the dew it a new day, just the same as the rest everyday seems to be the same so there is no best go to school and be told what to do come home from practice and call my boo listen to my friend problems and wish i would die so i'm forced to lay and bed and cry after 3 years my dad said he'd come get me if he had a chance when i opened the door didn't know who he was with a 1st glance now my friend come to me and says she has a problem with drugs I don't know what to do, this isn't something that can be fixed with hugs I walk into school with confidents and a smile on my face theres no doutb I'm Kali Nicole Tichenor, gossip queen, i know what everythin is about So while I look at myself as F-U-C-K-E-D i have every1 lookin up to me i'm 14 years old and it seems like i have the world on my shoulders sumtimes I brake down and cry, thats when a fall because of the boulders then i reliezed if u make 1 person happy then 1 will be mad Then i jus want to choke people, vilonce is the answer, i was taught from my dad so here i am with a fake smile, fake emotions, and fake life, I guess that make me fake so why do i get everyday and start over when i wake?
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So what chicks can rap too/ you just won't battle me cause i can beat u/ Respect List: AKA (down, and keepin it real) KoObOo (A true friend wouldn't be the right words) The Disciple (mmmm Tight probbly wouldn't be the word) lol Tony Montana (thiz my main boi for rapping) Ciara Myst (hey if u cant beat em', join em') phatom (he jus got skill) LivenLegend ( thiz my friend for life) fluidmoon (she got ova half ya'll beat) |
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10-02-04, 01:15 PM | #2 | ||||
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nice ma
I liked it ma jus structure it betta cuz it drives crits away if it aint layered u 14 too?????? hiphop couple!!!!....lol PC-
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10-02-04, 10:59 PM | #3 | |||||
23-7, 16 Knockouts
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IP: 28AD 5545
dat shit was good. u got mad talent. yo y niggaz sleepin on dis shit, uppin^^^^^^^^
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10-02-04, 11:00 PM | #4 | |||||
23-7, 16 Knockouts
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IP: 28AD 5545
yo mayb we can battle
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10-03-04, 11:05 AM | #5 | ||||
My Dick Stay Wet
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IP: 3240 794D
that was sum good shit....u could of had a better closer tho...but dat was sum good shit...lookin forward to see some more of ur shit gurl....
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10-03-04, 11:10 AM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: A0C8 44A9
not to shabby...
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