Battle Rules:

10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no bullshit ass votes eitha


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-04-05 at 08:32 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

LyricalMa$tamind has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-01-05 08:50 PM.

I'm tired of this, n00bs try to "get under my skin" like psoriasis
But I'm more a hazard to ChiTownsoulja's record, than H-I-V viruses...
I Beat This Kid With Out My 'Lyrics', Call Me An 'Instrumental'
Exploding His 'Brain Cells' With Out Even Touching His 'Mentals'
Battlin me's like "hugging furnaces", I bring rookies close to the heat
And left in tourniquets, every cut equals opponent's defeat
Ya Punches Can't Live In This Battle Just Leave Em' There To-Waist
'Circus Acts' Ya Verse Is Another Reason To Throw A 'Pie' At Ya-'Face'
Kid Strains-His-Verse, Remains-Left-Burst, Vebal Reform Him Mayn
Often Mistaked For 'G-Unit' Coz He'll Never Make It Far With 'The Game'


MURKED HIM!!!!!
10 lines....................................im out

GOOD LUCK MAYNE

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chitownsoulja has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-02-05 04:14 PM.

you must be blind, a mastamind, ya mind cant masta mine,
i spit a verse that''lll blow ya mind,throw ya mind,off like a nine
popped off that''ll leave a hole in ya spine you cant flow n ya rhymes are like a fat kid runnin fallin behind
guns bigger than paul bunyan holdin all the time...

you dont want it wit me you''ll see a red dot
have you gaspin for breath grabbin ya chest like red foxx
one to ya head you''ll be in a red box come once you wont come twice like chicken pox eat that weak shit up like rice
ya verse you shoulda tossed like dice lost like christ to those who dont belive in the afterlife if you think you can beat me
you aint actin right the fo five leave you leakin like a sink tonite so think before you speak aight

Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

Chi- Your verse needs elevation, your punches was weak the flow was ok, but the structure needs help. Try to lengthen your lines the same....Uh you didn't have any personals nor punches....nothing special in your verse dawg just plain too basic..

Lyricalmastermind- Nice man, you had a nice verse, good punches with some decent wordplays. I suggest to you to use some more personals dawg and flipping them into a wordplay and a punch, but this verse was good yo nice.


Overall=This battle is one-sided, i vote for lyricalmastermind because he had better punches, better wordplays. His punches were effective. Chi your punches was all basic, non-effective, it needs to be better wording and your structure just fucked up the flow of reading, sorry man you need elevation...work on punches and structure...1

Lyricalmaster mind return a favor in this battle

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193594

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Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

Flow- LM flow was ten times better than the others dudes cuz i could read it N rap it out loud with ease

Punches- Lm had nice hard hittin fresh punches while Chi just had punches tht were weak or ive seen before in some shape or form goin towards LM

Metas- From wat i could see they were alright

Personas-LM was right about dudes lines being stretched

So Lyrical Ma$tamind takes this with ease


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thanx 4 daa votes yall
still uppin dis battle ya herd meh
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Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

Wow, Both Had Seriously Weak Punches...
You Guys Gotta Work On That Alot...
Chi Actually Had Settups For Good Punches...
But NEVER Fallowed Through And Just Rambled On With A Bunched Of Crap...

Chi Structure Was Also Really Off...
Your Syllable Count Was Horrible...
Some Lines Wrapped The Page And Some Only Covered Half...
You've Got A Bit Of Work Mayn...
Uuuum In Terms Of Flow...
Masta Had Alot More Of A Stable Flow...
While Chi's Lack Of Structure Ruined His Flow For Me...

So Ya, Thats Whats Up...
Mastamind Definately Took This Battle...
But Both Of You Should Really Work On Elevating...
Stay Up And Keep Writing...
.One.

uppppppin 4 da K.o

onli 2 mo votes 4 da K.O
murkin dis suck ass nigga

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