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Old 10-29-06, 10:35 PM   #1
DaTrusHurtz
I Hurt.
 
Group D: Grams (1-0) vs. R. Christensen (1-0)

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Its week 2 of this 7 week season. Most people voted last week and the number of no-shows wasn't too bad, but the quality of punches needs to go up. Don't rush this battle and drop your hardest. There's a $50 cash prize coming up this season. That $50 won't be yours if you half-ass.

Battler #1: R. Christensen
Battler #2: Grams

Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Wednesday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #2 drops 2 bars due Thursday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Friday night (11:59 pm ET)

4 Links in check-in due Sunday afternoon (6:30 pm ET)

Here are a few rules that you SHOULD know already but if not, now you do:
- Feeding is allowed AND encouraged!
- If you sway, you WILL be DQ'ed. There are no second chances.
- Voting rules are enforced. If you dont leave links you'll lose. And remember, all votes must be broken down bar by bar.
- If you havent read the rules yet, do it now.

Good Luck.
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Old 10-30-06, 09:28 AM   #2
R.Christensen
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Am I ever not the first battler?
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Old 10-31-06, 04:09 AM   #3
grams
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im here.............
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Old 10-31-06, 10:51 AM   #4
R.Christensen
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Quote:
Originally Posted by grams
I'm cold with my punches, I'll throw first while I'm coastin'
you could soak your hand in pine tar..............................
.............and still not grip a punch that'd be worth postin'


Beating me is fantasy, and as cocky as that might seem...
You need to "get a grip"... on how to develop a rhyme scheme
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Old 10-31-06, 11:52 PM   #5
grams
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Quote:
Originally Posted by R.Christensen
Beating me is fantasy, and as cocky as that might seem...
You need to "get a grip"... on how to develop a rhyme scheme



Its not a fantasy of winning, your ok... but then again
you do MMA so you can get a grip on sweaty men
Probly can't fight for shit, WWF reject likes to wear tights
and when backed into a corner......................
he treats it like a textbattle, he becomes a bitch and bites
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Old 11-01-06, 08:14 AM   #6
R.Christensen
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Quote:
Originally Posted by grams
Probly can't fight for shit, WWF reject likes to wear tights
and when backed into a corner......................
he treats it like a textbattle, he becomes a bitch and bites


Stretched as shit... ya neck will be when I leave you in bad health...
Since..
...the only thing I wear thats tight... is when I hang ya sis like a champ belt
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Old 11-01-06, 10:55 AM   #7
N.Tavarez
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From: East Coast
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Beating me is fantasy, and as cocky as that might seem...
You need to "get a grip"... on how to develop a rhyme scheme
DECENT PUNCH KINDA SIMPLISTIC THOUGH


Its not a fantasy of winning, your ok... but then again
you do MMA so you can get a grip on sweaty men
DECENT TOO SIMPLE BUT FUNNIER
Probly can't fight for shit, WWF reject likes to wear tights
and when backed into a corner......................
he treats it like a textbattle, he becomes a bitch and bites
LOL MAYBE I LIKE THIS CUZ IM A WRESTLING FAN

Stretched as shit... ya neck will be when I leave you in bad health...
Since..
...the only thing I wear thats tight... is when I hang ya sis like a champ belt
UMM NAH CHRIT I REALLY DDINT DIG THIS MUCH

SPURISED TO SEE GRAMS COME BETTER THAN CHRIT
MAYBE OTEHR VOTERS WILL SEE IT DIFFERENTLY BUT TO ME GRAMS GOT THIS
V/ GRAMS
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Old 11-02-06, 04:32 PM   #8
Possible
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Damn though.


Beating me is fantasy, and as cocky as that might seem...
You need to "get a grip"... on how to develop a rhyme scheme
ts lol, but commoner, shit nowadays fuckas usin puns left and right
Stretched as shit... ya neck will be when I leave you in bad health...
Since..
...the only thing I wear thats tight... is when I hang ya sis like a champ belt
See it could mean 2 things, well to me it does. First is like, when your in a ring and they hang the belt in the middle in the air? I figure that, or just straight walking out holding the belt in the air?, I dont know, let me know, but if it is the first one, I think thats dope.


vs.

Its not a fantasy of winning, your ok... but then again
you do MMA so you can get a grip on sweaty men
ehh, see I don't like it. ineffective kinda
Probly can't fight for shit, WWF reject likes to wear tights
and when backed into a corner......................
he treats it like a textbattle, he becomes a bitch and bites
See this is lofl though. I thought this was a good line though.

See I'm not going to vote though because of whatever but, Straight battle. I'll come back in a sec vote when I decide.
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Old 11-03-06, 12:56 AM   #9
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R. Christensen
Beating me is fantasy, and as cocky as that might seem...
You need to "get a grip"... on how to develop a rhyme scheme
I laughed, I dig it..
Stretched as shit... ya neck will be when I leave you in bad health...
Since..
...the only thing I wear thats tight... is when I hang ya sis like a champ belt
Lmfao...Nice, good feed of his punch../Note to Possible: I'm pretty sure he means around the waist..

Grams
Its not a fantasy of winning, your ok... but then again
you do MMA so you can get a grip on sweaty men
Wasn't really feeling it/I could see this being played out on him before too..
Probly can't fight for shit, WWF reject likes to wear tights
and when backed into a corner......................
he treats it like a textbattle, he becomes a bitch and bites
This was alright, pretty streched though..

Hahaha, I got R. Christensen taking this one..

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Old 11-05-06, 02:59 AM   #11
Te Ora
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Beating me is fantasy, and as cocky as that might seem...
You need to "get a grip"... on how to develop a rhyme scheme
decent.. seemed a bit random to feed off this particular punch for yours but wtvr
Stretched as shit... ya neck will be when I leave you in bad health...
Since..
...the only thing I wear thats tight... is when I hang ya sis like a champ belt
i think you shoulda put a ? mark after "stretched as shit". decent flip

vs.

Its not a fantasy of winning, your ok... but then again
you do MMA so you can get a grip on sweaty men
meh.. i'm sure this sort of thing has been used much better on him
Probly can't fight for shit, WWF reject likes to wear tights
and when backed into a corner......................
he treats it like a textbattle, he becomes a bitch and bites
both of the personals u used in this are pretty played on him.. somehow they combine and make something not too bad


this one is real close.. i'm ganna edge it to r. christensen for coming fresher.

v/ r. christ.
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Old 11-05-06, 10:25 AM   #12
Daubs
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Chris

Beating me is fantasy, and as cocky as that might seem...
You need to "get a grip"... on how to develop a rhyme scheme

yeah this was decent

Stretched as shit... ya neck will be when I leave you in bad health...
Since..
...the only thing I wear thats tight... is when I hang ya sis like a champ belt

nice feed buty i didnt think it was too cold.

Gram

Its not a fantasy of winning, your ok... but then again
you do MMA so you can get a grip on sweaty men

i see the feed you were coming with, it was OK

Probly can't fight for shit, WWF reject likes to wear tights
and when backed into a corner......................
he treats it like a textbattle, he becomes a bitch and bites
Just average

i got chrit takin it.

v./c
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Old 11-05-06, 10:29 AM   #13
Cocaine
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my vote was fucked up.. here i'll fix it

R. Christensen
Beating me is fantasy, and as cocky as that might seem...
You need to "get a grip"... on how to develop a rhyme scheme
wasnt feeling this
Stretched as shit... ya neck will be when I leave you in bad health...
Since..
...the only thing I wear thats tight... is when I hang ya sis like a champ belt
pretty good

Grams
Its not a fantasy of winning, your ok... but then again
you do MMA so you can get a grip on sweaty men
this was iight.. didnt hit super hard tho
Probly can't fight for shit, WWF reject likes to wear tights
and when backed into a corner......................
he treats it like a textbattle, he becomes a bitch and bites
good i really liked this

got this going to grams..
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Old 11-05-06, 07:47 PM   #14
DaTrusHurtz
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Beating me is fantasy, and as cocky as that might seem...
You need to "get a grip"... on how to develop a rhyme scheme
alright..hits cuz its kinda true, but still kinda basic

vs.

Its not a fantasy of winning, your ok... but then again
you do MMA so you can get a grip on sweaty men
not bad.. about as good as the above punch
Probly can't fight for shit, WWF reject likes to wear tights
and when backed into a corner......................
he treats it like a textbattle, he becomes a bitch and bites
lol, nice, i laughed at this

vs.

Stretched as shit... ya neck will be when I leave you in bad health...
Since..
...the only thing I wear thats tight... is when I hang ya sis like a champ belt
eh, feed is okay but the diss just isn't that there

Close battle here, I actually got Grams edgin' this. Really could go either way. Prettty cool battle.

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Old 11-05-06, 08:00 PM   #15
Oneduh
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Beating me is fantasy, and as cocky as that might seem...
You need to "get a grip"... on how to develop a rhyme scheme
not bad

vs.

Its not a fantasy of winning, your ok... but then again
you do MMA so you can get a grip on sweaty men
ehhh
Probly can't fight for shit, WWF reject likes to wear tights
and when backed into a corner......................
he treats it like a textbattle, he becomes a bitch and bites
decent
vs.

Stretched as shit... ya neck will be when I leave you in bad health...
Since..
...the only thing I wear thats tight... is when I hang ya sis like a champ belt
okish

overall weak battle but I think chrit came a lil harder

v/Chrit
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