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Smartzz | 0 | 0% | |
.::N-Sight::. | 5 | 100.00% | |
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06-05-04, 10:47 AM | #1 |
GrOwN aSs MaN
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N-Sight vs. Smartzz
IP: 7802 99A5
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06-05-04, 11:02 AM | #2 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 3240 794D
iight chekin in
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06-05-04, 11:20 AM | #3 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 3240 794D
G'L
The kid SmArTzZ gonna tear tru insight,heat source leaving u wit lack of air liked i smashed ya wind pipe, ,dispite hiz dum reactions wen hiz raps ignite,im not polite,i juss dun undersrtand i thingz u write, leaving u diagnosed wit a fatal disease,while u down on ya kneez,no motions u freeze, ,lata on u diceased,cuz it aint easy,and im not gonna let u get a freeb, like everybody only kno 1 letta wen u rap all u see iz frequent z's,,u aint beatin me left blueprints to show how i waz gonna leave u demolished,beating thiz rookie let me see u acomplish, but u aint u got thingz a total twist,stab u leaving my knife full of hemorrhagic cyst, and my rapz are tight like clenched fist,leaving u ripped tragicly,tryna battle me. wit my cannible rhymez dat'll eat up ya inside and leave u wit zero capacity, now hiz skin tone the color of th eletters on my ps2,hit u wit bana clipz like im holding a zoo ur naim insight i see y u like blind spits,wit weak lines u rhyme wit..(ran outta time )
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06-05-04, 11:21 AM | #4 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 3240 794D
itz not over 16 barz itz juss dat in m wordpad it made it look like dat
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06-05-04, 11:24 AM | #5 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 3240 794D
bananna*
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06-05-04, 11:33 AM | #6 |
GrOwN aSs MaN
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IP: 7802 99A5
This kid ain't got much smarts battlin' me..I'll mame this cat-
Toss his head to give him a fast start..still can't outpace me on track- I'll swing at your head with an ax..str8 decapitate this spaz- Shove your brain up ur rectum..u still won't be a smart ass- You got all the smarts in your SIG..get off Einstein's penis- Even if you jacked him off..u still wouldn't have a stroke of genius- I'll have you running away like SONIC in ur avy when my shells hit- Kid must be crazy..claimin' to be smart but can't even spell it- 8th disciples think they GOD's chosen..but y'all missin' four-heads- Like I punched ya faces in..face it, ya style couldn't be more dead- Structure is the wackest part of ur verse..wordplay in ur rhymes is missin- This kid thinks he's Suga Ray...nah, thats just sugar lines you spittin- Listen, how u beatin me with fucked up grammar..ur words stammer- I got this in the bag like Santa..put the pump to this bum like Hammer- Fuck outta huuuuuuuuuuuuur! |
06-05-04, 11:43 AM | #7 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 3240 794D
lol good battle iight uppin
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06-05-04, 11:45 AM | #8 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 828D 0B7A
Aight Honest Vote Goes To N-sight For Better Punches,flow And Structure
I Couldnt Understand The Other Guys Structure So The Vote Goes To N-sight !!! Peace
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06-05-04, 11:45 AM | #9 | |
Most Wanted
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IP: 0CD4 8C79
Im gonna have to say...N sight won this battle......he had better structure,better wordplay and flow....smartzz u came pretty hard but not good enough u had some ok punches u werer kinda giving urself props in the beginning of the rhyme ...not gonna win a battle by giviing urself props ya know wat i mean???yabut good battle guys...but i think this line was pretty hot^^^^^
8th disciples think they GOD's chosen..but y'all missin' four-heads- Like I punched ya faces in..face it, ya style couldn't be more dead- Vote-N-Sight
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06-05-04, 11:46 AM | #10 | |
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ok
IP: 6AD2 8F43
this goes to n-sight
smartz-good flow need to work on structure though u hzd a few multies in there ur punches were ok but a bit played u need to up your creativity and wordplay and hit wit sum personals coz u had none n-sight-gud flow/structure..multies were there punches were original...... You got all the smarts in your SIG..get off Einstein's penis- Even if you jacked him off..u still wouldn't have a stroke of genius- ^^^that verse woz ya best...made me laugh^^^ u also had no personals but u jnew u had enough isuppose n-sight takes this coz he came harder. vote-n sight |
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06-05-04, 12:25 PM | #11 |
Skadoosh!
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IP: D20A 40EC
BREAKDOWN
Smartzz: ok this was a pretty weak drop in my opinion. ure flow was aight but a little choppy in places cuz ure structure was weak, all ure lines were stretched like fuck. punches, u didn't really have any hard hittin ones and some of the concepts were played. u lacked in creativity, ure wordplay was not that gud, but ure still elevatin ure game so it was an aight drop. OVERALL 6/10 N-Sight: nice drop. u beat this guy easily, u had a tight flow, ure verse flowed nice from start to finish, u had a gud structure everything was kept the same length. u had some nice punches in ure verse, some were pretty weak but mainy they were hittin hard. personals were in there, some were pretty funny. u had sum nice wordplay in places but sum basic in other places. u had sum creativity in a couple of lines...overall nice drop. OVERALL 7.5/10 V/ - N-Sight |
06-05-04, 12:25 PM | #12 | |
Knock out kings fur life
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IP: 3240 794D
yea this one goes to N-SIGHT he had better fl0w, more pucnhes and had allot more personels in his lyrics so my vote goes to N-sight peace. oh yea hit up on this plz thnx.
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06-05-04, 12:48 PM | #13 | |
~Whos Next?~
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IP: FDA6 9B56
im feelin N-sight on this one yall. he had better flow, structure was a big part of this cause smartazz had no structure what so ever. the opener is what won it for N-sight more than anything. good battle tho, no hate to smartazz
VOTE - N-sight
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